All Comments on 'Spankings [S-42] Pt. 01'

Utter shit. Obviously written by a man with no imagination or writing ability. Grow up!

not anyway is this bdsm

1. Move it to Incest. That rules over everything, and spanking doesn't make it bdsm

2. That purdy little hinnie is gonna start looking like elephant hide with that much spanking.

3. It's Angelina JOLIE, not Joline. Ain't no Dollie Parton song involved.

That fact that the character thinks she's oh so perfect is ridiculous and nearly impossible. I couldn't get passed the first damn paragraph! Need someone to proofread this story and any future stories you write before posting, I also a agree with the other posts that this is NOT BSDM it's INCEST!