All Comments on 'Snippets: Early Morning'

One question where do i get a girl like that?

great stories keep it up!

Really hot story. I liked it a lot.

Now I know I got guypped in the sister dept. I want to file a protest! Keep writing, you set the stage so nice with different paths Jack can walk down.

I have to ask a semi-serious question. What's with the single letter, 'C', for her name? Is it supposed to be mysterious? Odds are that if Jack has more than 1 sister, their names both don't start with C. I find it a little distracting.

After three stories they still haven't touched! We need a little more action, I think!

I enjoyed this story immensely, and woukd love to read more. I like your story pace, and the awkward situations you characters struggle through to reach the "climax."

I really was delighted by Jack's honesty concerning his stalking and so much more about C's story, guys only seeing her body instead of her whole being. You really brought those both as personalities into life, IMHO opinion this is an important part of the art of erotic tales. Chapeau, :)

I look forward to reading 30 or so chapters.

sweet plot dvlpmnt, yum

continue on please it reads very easily and now the plot is set there can be fun had!!

I started playing with my penis, please don't stop!

And better. She is quite something.

Explaining every detail so completely.

I enjoy your writing.

One point though, lying on your stomach, is prone.

lying on your back is supine.

Still loving it!

She's no longer teasing, so much as tempting.

I figure that if it were real life then Sam would have to have at least an inkling that he's attracted to her, if only from the boost to his sex life with Sam, but this would also give her reason to accept it. Okay, women generally don't like their men getting too intimate with other women, but Sam could reasonably think 1) She's his sister - he won't take it anywhere, and 2) even if he does, he can hardly leave Sam for her.

One thing though: When he first saw her naked on her back it was his first view of her bare breasts, which should have made an impression, yet he ignored them in his description. Seems strange.