All Comments on 'Sisters'

Great story...keep this story line going with followups

Tx, you are having too much fun. This one is a hot one and very well written. Thanks for the fun.

Fantastic story. And don't tell me one - or maybe both - of the twins isn't going to break their "not in my pussy" rule sometime soon. Can't wait to read it!

You absolutely need to continue this story. It is one of the best I've read in a long time.

Great story line never got boring

Wonderful story...cant wait for part 2

incredibly hot story. i'd love to read more, hoping for a second chapter or even third chapter

That was a good read. You get my vote in the annual contest, TxRad.

The story ran on and on and on far to long in places. It lacked sensual text. It my book it was just a fair fuck story.....

The story was really hot. Love the innocence. There are some spelling mistakes however, that are repeated throughout. If you are continuing the story I would like to see some new characters. Cut down chapters and the last 2 paragraphs are a bit weak. Overall an 8 out of 10 read.

I would like to see some more chapters of the three of them getting together, and this time some cherries get broken. With a bond between the two girls to him, that no one can ever break or get between the two girls and him. They really love one another and plan on having a life long affair.Thanks for the very good story...............Rich

This story of kids learning some (but not much) sex from each other is kind of sweet in its playfulness -- but way too drawn out, slow, and not nearly as sexy as it tries to be. Sexual experimentation is totally normal, but should be more fun than this. What young girls leap at anal toys before a cock? I don't know why I give this tale a 75% rating.

This is great!!

You got ah read this one. Its good from start to finish! W.S.

Great start, amazing finish, one of the Best ever!

Dude, you have to keep this going. Have him pop their cherries. Or something. Because that was awesome! And more installments would be fantastic!

I fingered myself and came at least 3 times reading this. Off to the shower for some of my own anal fingering. Sheryl

One of the best every i had to stop play a little my self 4 or 6 times my girl friend loved it.

I came 4 times reading this story, i too can't wait and hope you write another chapter and let the cousin take there cherries.

Awesome. I have never read any erotica as elaborate as this one. What I loved in this one is that unlike many others, this does not have a predictability. Fantastic stuff. The curiosity grows each time I finish this page. Each time I read this, I end up cuming not less than 3 times. I love it and this is the best one I have read in my lifetime. I never get tired reading this one and it is probably the 10th time I read it this morning. Heading to take a warm shower and to take care of myself down there. Keep posting more and do continue what happened next.

This was very sexy and suprisingly sweet which added a whole new dimension for me. I'm normally all about the erotic horror or non consensual type of story but this blew me away. I have been left wishing I had a twin sister x

This was one of the best I have read so far! It kept me interested throughout the entire story! I really hope you continue with this story!!! :D

I couldn't stop reading til I finished. A great story. Well done. Hope there is more to cum! Thanks.

I have read a lot of stories in various categories and this one is so far above ALL the others. Obviously it is well written and flows perfectly. Even though competitive, curious twin sisters are the ultimate fantasy somehow it is totally believable. The slight difference in the sisters outlook, the questions we have all had, the excitement of each new discovery, some by accident, the emotions, even the humor (caught myself laughing a couple of times), the lack of porn type or just rude/crude verbiage that plagues may stories. Plenty of great sex too. Really a fun and captivating read.

OK on a scale of 1 to 5 I give this a 9.

I hope there will be more to come with the sisters and their cousin as I stated loved it.

Really enjoyable. A definite five star piece and would love to give it more.

That was great. Thanks

This is the best story I have read in a long time. Much more than a wham bam story, A believable build up and learning process and totally erotic, combines my 2 favorite fantasies.

Very interesting I have twins and wonder sometimes if they do have these kind of feelings.My husband is a twin and I have had sex with his brother and both of them are everything you would ever want.They both can eat my pussy and as i cum they get all that hot cum and then when we fuck I cum again.

what an awesome way to learn!! wish I had a twin sister!

I read the whole thing in one sitting and couldn't believe how hot this was! You're very talented, keep going!

WOW. Amazing. I'm sure I speak for all of us......pls give us some more.

A great writing job of making the youngsters appear so innocent while surrendering to their desires. This story makes old folks like me wish to return to those days when everything was so new,

Please continue this story it was very good. Well written I think you should carry this on a bit more!! please

If any story deserves a squel this one does.Any chance of writing a screenplay.Done right would be a beautiful story.Even done badly the potenal for profit could be great-Please think about it....,MAS

I suppose for many people this is more exciting than oral sex or just fucking. My sister/lovers and I don't like anal but we love "eating" each others pussy's. It was a big let down because the sister's in this story preferred anal over pussy. Our only lovers are each other and younger girls that want to try what we do. No complaints yet. <G>. Have fun with who you want to and however ant to

Wonderful scenario, good setup. I loved the exploring by innocents. But all the ass sex left me cold. Not my thing at all. Story would have been much better for me if the sisters' reluctance and commitment to remain vaginal virgins had waned. Easily a 5 if that scenario had been presented.

Excellent!

I've read this at least once but it was nice to run across it again!! It was really exciting because when I was a teen boy I had two younger girl cousins that were both little hotties and they were interested in playing around :). I missed out on going very far because we didn't get together very often :( one was a short skinny brunette and the other was a taller curvy blonde. Closest we ever gotten was a very short skinny dip in the middle of broad daylight, interrupted by parents driving up on our lot at the lake. Fortunately we could see them a half mile away!

I like anal but my wife not so much :/ trying to convince her to convince her so we can work out some issues hard been proving a challenge :(

please please write more but make it were he fucks there pussy this time and gets them to have his kids ;)

everything was great but they seem too nieve for their age try making them alittle more mature next time.

Loved the story! I've read it a dew times off and on over the years now and its still enjoyable! I don't get some of the retarded posts below... Last few looked like they were written by a thirteen year old. One previous to those was whining about it being an anal only story and wanted it written so they gave up their cherries. Lots of those out there, the point of this story is anal sex! Aparently having anal sex to save your cherry is becoming more popular too, would have loved to see that when I was growing up, lol!

I love that the story actually does anal right though, sizing up and making sure things fit so he isnt hurting them, and using LOTS of lube! So many losers write stories where the guy fucks her with no lube or just some spit, which is total bullshit. There would be tearing and bleeding, or worse!

I'd certainly like to find a couple of sisters like this though that cum at the drop of a hat with anal sex! Never really seen that, and Ive been around the block a few times :). ....but then again, everyone always cums their brains out in rhese stories, lol ;)

ONE OF THE BEST I'VE READ ON THIS SITE

I think this is a great story of Discovery. Sex, yes, but discovering what sex really is. Watching porn is not the experience of sex. Self-Discipline also. The twins knew where they were drawing the line. Their virginity was, currently anyway, being saved for their future husbands. Trust and Friendship. For their first time experience and letting him lick them to orgasm (the one time when a human is most vulnerable) and then use their assholes, they had to have had complete trust in him. Had he took liberties that they had not wanted, or try to use force that would all have been over. He had to have the same trust in them. Men are just as insecure about the size of their penis as women are about their breast size or 'is my butt too big?" They could have hurt his feelings badly if they had been even a little cruel. Taking their virginity when that is not what they wanted yet would be betraying them all, even himself. And what would getting both his cousins pregnant accomplish. At 18 or so? That would help nobody nor would it help make the story more erotic than it is.

incredibly hot and very amusing at the same time. I lolled several times. Would love to read about what happens next between him and his two cousins.

Hot and nasty. I have a couple of cousins that I would have liked to pounce on, back in the day. Good job, and keep us informed about what those crazy kids get up to! Mmmm, Mmmm, Mmmm!

Holy shit I could never be that lucky !

Honestly, it was a really hot story. I loved the dynamic between the three of them, but I do have to say their lack of knowledge of sex and basic human anatomy is pretty childish. You say that they are 18? They sound like they are 10 and that thought really ruins it for me. I have no problem with them being virgins, but when they start calling their genitalia by childish names, it kills the mood.

The story however, is still a great story. It just could have used a little more thought on the vocabulary and mindset.

Its bullshit, better if they lost their cherries and one took an accidental creampie

By law you must say that your characters are age 18 or older. In my mind this would have probably happened at an earlier age so that is what I imagine them as being and think of myself at that age. I messed around with two female neighbors about my own age. We may have been 13 or so but I think younger. I didn't do well because I had so Little knowlege. I knew nothing about foreplay, etc. I wish we could have gotten together years later when we knew what we were doing. As children there is the experimental stage for us and of course the parents try to keep control of us as they should.

great read and would like to see it continue. seen some comments about the vocabulary and seeming lack of knowledge but it sounds like what would happen in a much more rural setting. Growing up on a farm there is not a whole lot of interaction between the opposite sex{especially when the nearest neighbor is 20 to 30 miles away} and experimenting is common when the opposite sex is there.

Ridiculously hot story, I was twitching through the entire thing. There definitely needs to be more of this story.

I loved the story line and how you took us through their learning stages of sex! That was just too damn hot!!!

Rad, i have followed you from your days at W. W. You were great then, but you are even greater now. This is your best yet. I live close to you, so I know about a lot of the places you have mentioned. I have probably seen you in town, but didn't know it. I know that without a doubt, you have seen me, because I am quite visible around town. Love your work. Keep it coming.

love the plot, great story, would love more even though this is a good complete story.

When there is pussy in the house??? NO WAY. Anal is the domain of Gays, I ain't gay...

Poor George, just an innocent goofy guy that gets caught up in making out with his twin cousins. Great story, got me plenty wet, but only believable if it were some 12 year olds learning about sex. I understand about the guidelines for stories and that everyone has to be of age. I feel that the cigar tube, hair brush and vibrator were stretching it a bit, pun intended. Usually it's one finger, two fingers, three fingers and then pop a dick in. All in all it was a very good story, just sorry George didn't get to poke some pussy.

This story reminded me of when I was in college and first dating my husband. We used condoms as I could not take the pill but one nite it broke and two weeks later my period was late. Thankfully I was not pregnant but afraid to have vaginal sex. So I learned how to have anal sex from a gay friend and that became our go to intercourse method for about two years. I really loved anal from the first time as he was patient and loving. My ass learned what felt good and hurt so after awhile he could pound me hard and I came really really strong. 25 years later anal still a big part of our sex life.

Love their first sexual experiences and one of the best descriptions of young anal sex - with love.

Explicit details, loved the slow buildup.. made one helluva story!!!

Great story and as others have commented, the ages would be around 12 to 14. I Had similar games with 2 girls down the street at that age. We got caught,, you can imagine the ruccass that occurred. I was kneeling between them, two fingers buried in each of their pussy's. Amazingly I didn't get all the blame but it was still pretty bad. As for critics who post anonymously, if you haven't got the balls to put your name shut the fuckup. Or post your own story and see how your work fares. Could still use an editor myself any volunteers?

This needs a continuation.

He came dozens of times in the shower?

Thanks for a well written story!

I have been on this site for years and this is the best story I have ever read.

Loved it !!!!! Would like to see a sequel to this if not a whole story line , RC

Very hot and nicely paced, I'd love to read more about Sarah and Janet's exploration of their sexuality with George.

YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

But I didn't like the anal crap. Who in the hell would want to fuck an asshole full of shit when there is a pussy RIGHT THERE!!! OK I suppose a Gay or Bi leaning Gay would, but NOT me!

Normally, I’m not big on anal. But this was initiated and controlled by the female. In that case since it is what she wants and she is enjoying it Al is all for pleasure.!

Great story, everyone is smiling and coming everywhere! My kind of fun!!!

…..and to mr Anonymous, who is afraid of his own name, the girls said 115 times they were virgins and they were going to stay virgins! Now before you reply with some lying B.S. bravado, look up what happens to rapists in prison. Your ass would make the Holland tunnel look small by the time you did your 20 years for forcibly taking their cherry!..or are you a closet homo hoping that ?

hahaha!

Totally amazing. Thanks

I read this four months ago and it is still Killer on a reread! Just Killer!

I guess Mr macho anonymous never replied. Just as well, the idiot. All you anonymous people need better names. Nothing happens to you for using a name. What’s the matter? Afraid they will announce you at your church service? LOL! Hypocrites!

Very exciting loved the twins mmmm

Cracker of a read. Five stars from me.

More please

That was a Kick ass story.

where is part two?

very good plausible story but i am waiting for part two.

Fair

(6/8/2023) This story would have been so much better if there weren’t so much anal. Way too much anal.

Sarah got seconds every time she should have had the anal orgasm before Janet. Next time share equally. I will comment again later.

more!

Do they continue to investigate? They have done everything they could without disturbing their freshness seals. Sisters Part 2 PLS

part 2 please

Fabulous story, but lots of proofreading needed to correct all the mistakes. Can't wait for the next instalment!

Where is the second half?