by silkstockingslover
Unbelievable! I feel dumber for having read this. I know it's fiction, but this didnt stretch the bonds of credibility, it freaking snapped them into. I feel like I should write the person who said to check out this great author, and virtually bitch slap them.
As an ending of the story, it was bad. As a stand alone, it was bad. Ending the story on characters we follow the perspective of lose and be in that situation is awful, especially since it's our perspective that loses. That's not even touching the stories enjoyment of throwing out consent, forcing innocents into their play with no consent or warning. This was terrible
This was interesting, it started off pretty good the first chapter or two, I'll even go along with the Master Carter part, but the college bathroom, Brandi, and everything else afterwards was a story spiraling so far out of control. I appreciate you actually wrote multiple parts and didn't leave it open ended like many of your stories, but it really jumped the rails. The details were great, the sex was hot, but not my favorite
I like this story. It has added to my fantasies. Brandi being so controlling. I would love to have her streach out my man pussy. Oh then all of the big black cock! That was streaching out all of the different fuck holes. Has got me craving real black cocks. But I don't know of any to satisfy my cravings. Wish I did!!
I am so engaged with Joan and Erica that tears welled up after they left the pet shop as they first spoke about Erica's transitioning fully. They spoke together with such love for each other that I cried a bit. I would dearly love to meet people like these.💋
You are such a fantastic story teller and I hope to one day be a bbc sissy slut