All Comments on 'She Was My Sister!'

You really need a copy editor. The story gets spoiled by your spelling errors

Was good, somewhat predictable (but aren't they all) would like to read the next part.....

I loved it I will give it 100 because i was in tears reading it i was so happy that he found his mom do you think that girl he knew before lori knew about his back ground

I read the story, and didn't see a single spelling error of any kind. Perhaps, and I say perhaps, a few grammatical errors, but most likely ones that benefit the story. But no spelling errors...

One of the best I have read. Now if the negative influences would just get a life rather than posting here.

this story is great please write more I cried and GOT Turned on all in one story Loved it

man I love incest stories they have more love then the other stories on this site and what errors man that person is blind there wasn't none

agree very good story but needs an editor a few goofs where you used the wrong words her instead of here guild instead of guilt but all in all very good try rereading and using an editor next time and maybe do a rewrite on this one

but nevertheless very enjoyable. Please keep writing.

Loved it, maybe it could have been longer, but still very nice

BORING. Needs more detail. You should of never wrote about death and sex not a good turn on.

Cool story ! This storyline really caught my eye. Very happy with the ending. Most people in the world are NOT models and/or slim/trim. Nice to see a story where average looking people meet, hook up and spark a romance that ends in a lifetime together.

Very good writing and a wonderful story.