All Comments on 'She Chose Me'

Thank you for your recent posting; an excellent first story with promise of more to come. This "just friends" relationship will bear watching as it develops. I hope you will continue the thread. Have you any other writing you would like to contribute for our edification? You obviously have talent and experience with the pen. I look forward to seeing more stories from you on this site.

The sensitivities of both are eloquently handled, and the sex is beautifully written. And very hot!

Keep posting no_naysayer. There are too few stories of this quality on Literotica nowadays.

You can't possibly stop in mid stream now No_Sayer. They need to find each other wholly. Keep it up brilliant effort,ciao

Well I'm not exactly panting, but dang close! Love a story that makes you physically react; you know, blushing and feeling warm and just that little bit breathless because I keep forgetting I need to breathe. Wonderful story! I await the next chapter.

I don't know whether to leave the ending to my imagination or beg you for a sequel. So I'll do both. Would you please write a sequel?

Not only does the author have a brilliant grasp of language (and thereby his/her craft) but a startling understanding of the female psyche. The story went by without a hitch, made me uncomfortable as well as aroused, and has me pondering my own reactions as well as those of the female character. To me, this borders close to literature.

Forget the condom the boys need a sister

I hope I've responded to everyone named, who has emailed, posted, or favourited this story.

So now, to the anons, my thanks too. There will certainly be a second chapter.

Thanks and best wishes to you all.

no_naysayer

Hats off to the writer who can make a gal soak her seat by virtue of reading a story. You're an extremely gifted writer able to evoke vivid powerful erotic images in one's mind...Bravo!...More!

Well written, highly erotic...very creative setup. It has potential and interest even without the sexuality of the piece. Very well done - (and it provided a hot climax, thank you!). I look forward to the remainder of the story, as promised.

You describe so well the feelings John has of wanting not to harm the valued and deep friendship with Betty, while also wanting to give them both what she needs. How, as the sexual being is released in her, it is also recognised and released in him. Thank you for the depth of feeling, the honoring of this oh-so-loving friendship which is so unusually well written. Please continue this beautiful tale of the release of the new Betty, and the new John as well.

Please continue, it left me wanting.......