by silkstockingslover
From an old man who loves your stories.
Great Christmas gift to us old guys.
That said. Check. Knees. Check. Cunt cum. Check. Cheesy puns and double entendre that pass for witty banter. Check. Yep, must be another Silkstockingslover story. They could be really good stories too, with their situations, but the dialogue makes me think of 80s comedies like revenge of the nerds and weird science. Oh well. Better than most, I guess.
Excellent work once more, Jasmine. I really enjoyed all of those scenarios, especially the scene in the Marshall's fitting room. And I am sure Santa would try to handle all five naughty (but nice) girls. :)
I don't tend to read Mature category stories, but saw the description and the author and decided to give it a try. Glad I did. Still, wish there had been more from the four girls than little snippets in the epilogue.
That was hot! One of your best stories. I can not wait until there are more chapters! Thanks Jasmine.
I’m guessing you saw that you’d laid the ground plan for a LONG series yet decided not to bother writing it. Hence the jam packed epilogues.
Hopefully you abandoned this to work on a better series?
Great story as always... Still waiting for another incest story, preferably mother and son.
amazing! You are a fantastic writer, Young Lady! Thank you for another great story!
Honestly I think this could been much better if you would have broken down this into at least three to five different things.
Very good story. A lot of twists and turns for only three pages. I would love to see a follow up with George enjoying all of the girls.
Without a doubt the best author on Literotica. I look forward to your stories coming out. This one was very hot. I enjoyed the various characters, and more so their personal discovery. Well done.
but it would be even better if instead of Epilogue 1 & 2, you would continue with telling the story. 4*
I loved it. And I liked the epilogues at the conclusion because I like stories no more than 2 or 3 pages long. Plus, as an older - no, not older - as an old man, I liked that George got the young woman because he was better than the young guys. Overall, Jasmine, with much to like and nothing to dislike, it was easy to rate the tale as 5 stars. You can write follow-ups of the epilogues in longer versions sometime in the future if you choose to do so. I agree also that illustrated versions would be delightful.
I have been reading Jasmine's stories for years and they never fail to capture me.
I love this story. It has many elements and even a nice opening for sequels. I would love to see a side story on how Josie and Ella came to be.
Wow, great story! Sure hope you'll maybe consider a follow up.
I loved this story as usual you have written an awesome story. Thank you for sharing another wonderfully written story.
I normally dislike silkstockingslover works as they are campy 1980s type stories. But this one was fun.
447. This was a good story. I enjoy girls loving girl tales . Could benefit from an expansion of those epilogues and let the new friends explore their sexuality.