All Comments on 'Seduce The Piano Player'

I loved this story very much (as an erotic story). Thanks.

Another great story about seduction and church people.....oh gosh, your stories are all great.....well written and believeable.......and involves my love for my church people and their secrets.....as we all have.....

Seduction was awesome as they had to develope their relationship......not straight into sex......awesome

I have really enjoyed reading this piece of fiction. Not that it doesn't occur every day of the year somewhere on the planet, but this was a fictional account. I am going to check some of your other work now.

The first chapter was believable, if a bit verbose, I thought "the promised land" was beyond hokey.But the second chapter was a disaster. I thought, if this guy keeps talking, he's going to talk himself out of a great piece of ass! When a woman says please stop talking and fuck me, and the guy says I'm not done talking yet, he deserves having her walk out. The third chapter is even worse. This story was like skiIng! Downhill all the way.

The Promised Land, I liked that. A good story and could have been based on truth. Many relationships start in similar circumstances and I bet goes on a lot around the church.

Confused about Josephs 3 children, where were they. Assumed they were both the same age.

Could have been shorter but it was well written.

REgards