All Comments on 'Ravishing Chloe'

by erin2000

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AfishingonadoAfishingonadoover 2 years ago

Love the story, hope there is a part 2 to continue the corruption!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

The second of yours I've read tonight and the second 5. Wow, how long can you keep this up?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Just not my favourite story that you have written. Basically it is a description of the sex act and not a story. Still like your efforts and I hope you can improve. I do not want to criticise you to much, unlike some of the idiots who continue writing rude comments to anyone that writes stories like yours. Thank you so much for your effort. Mel B known as Hornydevil47

mike24169mike24169about 2 years ago

Don't worry about "hindsight2020"s comments. Some people only know their own hatred for themselves and others. I agree with afishingonado and can't wait for part 2, although I agree with the first anonymous, in the respect that the story felt like it was written quickly, without taking the time to really flush out more descriptive detail, the little things that connect us to the characters and the scenes. Would love to know more about Chloe.

On a side note, I'd love to know if Shannon lives near us. I'd love for my wife to have a friend like her. Would really turn the steam up in our marriage, as I'm sure it will for Andrew.

FyrscapeFyrscapeabout 2 years ago

love to see another chapter

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

It’s a lust filled moment, and a new beginning.

Thanks for sharing, Jackie.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Wow! That was wild! ... Refreshing take on corrupting a friend rather than hubby doing the pushing.

TrstxxxTrstxxx8 months ago

Andrew is a fool…he should be partying with them and watch his wife take that big cock. Join the fun!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

I absolutely loved it

1509196215091962about 1 month ago

Great story, thanks. Cloe deserves another night or two with Shane and Shannon.

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