All Comments on 'Party of Five Ch. 12'

This story is worth the wait. Just keep writing.

This series is too good to rush.Take your time and do not publish the next until you have two ready .It gives time for second thoughts

i dont think i have ever found such a story that i loved so much,... i fell for the four main characters (not so much the mom, only because she wasnt really in it much). reading this made me feel like i was apart of their family , acually being there abserving this first hand. you are the best wrighter in my opinion and i'd like you to keep writing chapters until time ends, if thats possible, please e-mail me at bulltech17@yahoo.com if you wish.... Thank you

This is an awesome story. The last chapter was a little short, but the whole story is amazing. It's one you have to read.

I've read a lot of stories, but this is the first one I have commented about. Its great, to many authors have whamm bang, thank you maam and its over. You write about the complications that such relationships would have to have. Keep it comming.

keep up at good work !

I am glad that Josh and Dawn are now making love instead of plain meaningless sex.

God I cant believe he didnt cum clean (sorry, had to do it!) with his sister! She is going to be so fucking hurt when she catches him in his crap lie... Been less painful to just admit he was fucking dawn, she could deal with that... Sigh.

Story still looking good though. However I gotta say this "oh Im so tired" crap is getting old! He's fucking 18! When *I* was tired and could barely move it was because I had worked a 12 hour shift in a 100 degree warehouse on my feet with no lunchbreak or breaks (eat while you work slackers!), then bicycle four miles home, get cleaned up, fuck my bud when she comes over, go out drinking at a houseparty with her till 4am then crash for 2 hours so I can get up for work again. THAT is a reason to drag my ass!

Fucking? Days off my fwb and I would fuck three times easy, 45 minutes minimum, and still stay up and go do shit. Yeah I ached the next morning, definately (even in good shape!) but none of this crazy dopamine sleep junk! Just saying!

....the panties... His sister was SNOOPING! Remember, he put them in the back of a drawer, they werent just laying around, lol.