by jeninflorida
OK, the professional writers might go into more detail and have more sexual situations but, this story is hot because it sounds true!
I absolutely loved it and would love to hear of more adventures, but because it's true, it might be a long time before she has another.
I was a little surprised that she did not make the husband or the visitor lick her, but maybe she was just in that mood. While I like stories with a more dominant wife this one was good and leaves the storyline open for sequels.
Maybe the next story will be more the wifes idea to have a threesome suprising the husband a little. With future stories building on the wifes desires and shocking the husband with first her desires and building to her demands.
But those are just my thoughts. The story was good and you should write what you like.
I loved your story. It is very erotic and believable. Ignore or delete the anon-y-mice. They are cowards. Please write some more.
I thought it was great...
loved it.. hot enough to get a good bedtime motor purrr'n.
It may be fiction, but being realistic makes it hot! Let's have some more like this.
The tiresome threesome with old friend thing has been done to death. This one offers nothing new.or better.