All Comments on 'My Submissive Valentine'

Nicely done, a sexy little story

Really like it!

Thank you

Anticipation and imagination are often better than endless description.

I'm already a little turned on. I really hope you continue this story. I would love to see the rest of the night played out.

Please continue the story. It's only there first date, and I'm intrigued.

you write really well... it flows easily... like a good film script which leaves a lot for the director, your story leaves a lot for the reader... it is erotic because it is all about imagination and desire, not polluted by tawdry details of reality ...

It doesn't need a follow up. As it is it's tremendously arousing. The whole point of the story has been made without reducing it to tripe.

Three thumbs up.