All Comments on 'My Step-Mother is a MILF Pt. 01'

Pure fantasy and great fun, but please check your work before submission. Is it Haley or Hayden?

Keep up the good work.

Well....not bad for a first timer, am I right?

I'll see myself out.

Before I go, I gotta ask. Are you still making stories, inculding TV shows? I remember a while you mentioned a while ago you did stories base off of TV shows just like "That 70s Show" story series you made. Do you still do that? I was hoping you can do another TV show series. Have you heard of DC's Stargirl? It's been some time since that show ended. Not a day goes by that I really miss that show. You can not deny there are lovey women there. Sexy ones too. (For god's sakes, the main character is a girl who looks like cheerleader and wears a top with a expose mid driff and booty shorts and rides a golden glowing staff like a stripper pole.) Who will be the lucky male protagonist to be pleased by the group of these women will be entirely up to you. Unless of course it's in couples which is fine.

Or maybe another series like Inside Job? Do a story about everyone's favorite emotional abused socially awkward nerdy girl, Reagan Ridley?

All kinds of expansion inculded.

You switched names....it went from Haley to Hayden.

Tommy28 - Sometimes I just want to get the stories off my hard drive. And you are right, I don't proof read as well as I should. But thanks for the heads-up. I've uploaded a corrected version. It should be on the site soon.

DDDDave

This is how to write big dick sex! It’s not that big if it fits the first time.

We need an accidental cream pie!

Lame

" Tomorrow's a new day after all!"".... Frankly , i don't GIVE a Damn....!!!!!