by Bigguyyyyy
loved the unique plot development and thanking slow descriptive sex scenes. well done.
Nice read. Enjoyed it thoroughly. Looking forward to Chapter 2 and beyond.
Thanks for sharing!
I got to the bottom of page 1 remembered it was a chapter 1 and thought Xxvcxcvbc what a place to stop a story !!!!! thats when I found page 2.
Excellent Story, I hope the following chapters are as good!!
This story brought back many events that took place in my past. I have been on this earth for a period of 84 years and I must say, this fits in with what I have been through. This is what being helpful in one way can bring helpfullnes in another way. I can still dream and I do dream. Thank you.
Excellent story... well-written and hot. One of the best I've read here.
Nice warm story. Kelly seemed to be having trouble taking you all in. How big are you Bigguy? Looking forward to reading chapter 2 and seeing what kind of a guy is Darrel.
Wow, you can’t beat the pure erotic joy of fucking a lady while she is still wearing her bra and panties! Great story!