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Click hereJudy smiled and agreed with me "I am sure my daughter would Andy, but then only if she found out and I couldn't possibly know who might tell her!" she smiled a wicked evil smile at me before straddling me and kissing me deeply and passionately.
I knew then this was not a one off, I spent the next two weeks fucking my mother-in-law senseless, in every way I could imagine. When my wife got home I was relieved to be getting a rest. Judy however had other ideas; she went to the doctors to get the pill so she wouldn't get pregnant. I had forgotten about that possibility and I spent a frantic four weeks waiting to find out if I had impregnated my mother-in-law, thankfully I hadn't. Despite this near catastrophe, I am still screwing Judy on a regular basis, as well as keeping my wife well supplied with cock, god help me if I get caught.
So you have a mother-in-law visiting because her husband cheated on her and she's spending the first third of the story talking about how much that hurt her and she's going to turn around and risk causing her daughter to experience that exact same pain?
Nope.. not buying in.to that. Maybe if you hadn't harped on her going On and On and On about how terrible that was it might be somewhat believable, but as you wrote it, nope.
Sounds to me like ReiDeBastos needs to be reading First time or Romance novels. If you do not like it why are you even on Literotica.
Been there done that ! It's harder to resist than you think, especially if so much about her reminds you of your wife. If you are that attracted to you wife, how could you not be attracted to another woman who is so much like her in so many ways.
I'm sure it happens a lot. I know from personal experience that it does happen. Keep writing.
I feel I have read this story maybe 100 times before or at least one with the same storyline. Still an entertaining read.
I'm in a quandary about scoring this entry. The writing seemed pretty good, if we discount the wife's name mix-up. Unless maybe the June who was crying isn't the wife; if not, who is she?
My main problem is with the dialogue and total disrespect for women--that plus Judy not respecting herself. If anyone really talks like that, I'm glad I never ran into them, it's a complete turnoff.
A quick check of your bio shows you've been busy for the last month and that your scores are pretty darn good, so you must be doing something right. Anyway, I wanted to give this story a 2 1/2 but settled on a 3.
Good luck! I repeat; for a newcomer, you ain't doing bad, even if I don't like this story.