by nightstalker1960
Promise us that there will be more chapters. Excellent tale of familial lust and satisfaction.
What was the point of him denying the other stripper? She just wanted to make up for vivian walking out. The only thing that scene did was turn me off of reading the rest completely. The hopeless mother loving son thing is just dumb. No actual guy would do that, and thats just not a believable scene. Bad start equals bad writing. Get better.
"Your too late sweetie." Should be "You're too late sweetie."
WOW! Please continue with this. We really liked it.
TBC
christinaklements@yahoo.com if anyone want to contact me.
and the guy asks, Why deny the waitress?
Any fella worth his salt knows the angst of seeing Mom as a stripper.
the loss of innocence weighs heavy in the moment.
Good story, well told.
this goes without saying this is gonna to need a part two and also find some way to get the other girl to come back. u sir have created a monster take responsibility.
Seriously? haha anon really? The guy finds out that his mother was working at a strip joint and through sheer luck it was her first day. He had more pressing matters on his mind like I don't know maybe finding out why she wanted to start stripping in the first place. But no you're right anon he should have just had sex with the prostitute disguised as a stripper first before finding out if his mother was alright. That would have made it soo much more believable right and make him a really really smart son too eh?
I mean who wants to read about a mother loving son thing in the incest/taboo section nah that would just be dumb. And with such an ambiguous title as Mom's a Stripper the mother son sex seemed to come way out of left field. No anon you are completely justified with your intelligent response.
One of the best on this site, I had cold chills running in the back room. Then when they got home everything went hot hot. Thanks for one hell of a story.
My mom has some great tits. They're not huge, but a good handful. If I saw her dancing I'd be checking them out big time! She's got a great ass too, but I'm a tit man. Fucking her would be a bonus.
It was good very good but it ended to soon and left off what happened to the two of them
I know it's been a while, but there is more here. The need for each other revealed when they let themselves have each other, their desire, the emotion, and the plainly fertile ground in front of them for more story.
None of that would exist without the quite good work you have done here.
I would grade you down for not putting out more on this couple, but, no, I do not do that.
Five for you
.. more ...
More to tell why do so many writers on here feel the need to never finish their stories