All Comments on 'Mental Manipulations Ch. 05'

by cuninglinguist61

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ResidentWeavilResidentWeavilalmost 10 years ago
Welcome back. Nice return

This chapter was a bit confusing. I may have to reread the story but it seems to be veering off into some sort of thriller. Not a bad thing but I didn't see any of this coming.

Also, the wife is not a very understandable character for me. Why did they marry? What does she know about him?

Still, it was a short but fun read. Thanks for continuing this. I look forward to more

insert_nameinsert_namealmost 10 years ago
good series

Ive been enjoying these - the plot is developing well and the sex is still great!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
next chapter ?

good read but sort of left hanging a little now need the next chapter

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
hooray

I've been hanging out for the next installment

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago

If my knowledge of the church is correct, then deacons are the only members of the church allowed to marry. Something is up with the pastor.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
We want more

Hey, when is the next one coming?

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
more please

I have enjoyed the first 5 chapters and look foward to the next installment please hurry

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
no more?

Nearly 5 months since the last plot. I don't think there's coming more. Too bad.

rightbankrightbankover 9 years ago
disjointed, insufficient introduction, not enough to work with to make

a story about good brood stock for family consumption. Poor Sarah needs to develop a backbone. and our protagonist needs to grow a pair.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Punishment for the pastor

I think he should make the pastor watch as he fucks his wife then dominate the pastor but making him a cock sucker or making him take it in the ass by his wife fucking him with a strap on

MarkT63MarkT63over 2 years ago

Just tell the pastor to give all his money to Jake, then stop breathing!!!

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