All Comments on 'Mary's Business Trip'

by Just Plain Bob

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lancewmlancewmalmost 14 years ago
Slice of life -- crap...

Mindless...

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichalmost 14 years ago
She would be handy at a sales meeting

Just let her fuck all of his hard to sign customers and let the good times roll.

hawkeye007hawkeye007almost 14 years ago
Terrible...

JPB at his worse!

EspressoBolusEspressoBolusalmost 14 years ago
Oh, come on!

While not up to his standards in terms of character development, this is funny! Hubby makes the best of it, and obviously so does Mary!

teh568teh568almost 14 years ago
What A Pussy

And its not hers. Actually, come to think of it it is her pussy...the one she married.

chytownchytownalmost 14 years ago
He's BACK!!!!!!!!!!!

HELLO BOB!!!!!!

RockyRatRockyRatalmost 14 years ago
A Quickie

Thanks Bob. I like a short, sweet and quick story every now and then. Bravo!

DWornockDWornockalmost 13 years ago
I understand why this story has a low rating.

I rated it 1*

FD45FD45almost 11 years ago
Doesn't really appeal.

Sorry

tae352001tae352001over 10 years ago
Wish you didn't write this

nothing erotic here, a wife is under the influence, taken into a bathroom and is basically raped. It would be ok to write the story where the husband calls the police then bursts in and pulls his wife out.. imagine how many civil actions just from the encounter after the police arrive. the first guy would pay anything to avoid a rape charge and branded a sex offender for life.

Tootight1Tootight1over 9 years ago
only 2 stars

the story was ok I guess in composition, but I can never condone or show any appreciation of a scenario, using date rape drugs, or being under the influence of alcohol. a penalty would be to remove the genitals of the perpetrator, male or female, so I would know that my daughter or grand daughter or wife wouldn't have to suffer through the aftereffects of such a crime, along with my neighbors, and families kids.

impo_58impo_58over 9 years ago
Please JPB...

If the story was for laugh, no funny at all...I always hope a lot about your stories...But some it seem you write them in your sleep....

BetterEndingBetterEndingover 8 years ago
Happily Ever After

And they all died happily ever after contracting Aids.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
So now he is her pimp?

I hope he told her to use condoms. Nasty business whoring around.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
STUPID

another stupid story of a wimp and his slut.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Should learn my lesson

Never bother with a JPB story with a score under 3.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Yet

Yet another man with no balls.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Pure

Pure garbage

Ocker53Ocker53over 4 years ago
Crap

Just a load of shit

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Cucks are that simple?

Damn what a Big pile of bullshit. Everyone Could create such crap!!!

iameaseliameaselover 3 years ago

Really, REALLY bad.

skruff101skruff101over 3 years ago

JPB just can’t help himself. A Spider-Man comic is more realistic than his cuck stories. Lol

TajfaTajfaover 3 years ago

Not one of your best. Even if he didn't care about the infidelity, what about disease? I really didn't like this one.

RB8BY3WIDERB8BY3WIDEover 2 years ago

Hope you like std's... Cuck crap sucks

NitpicNitpicover 2 years ago
One

One word.Garbage.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I guess this story is dated before mobile phones.

Client rings him in the hotel bar, on the hotel phone and conducts business with all the bar noise in the back ground.

Let me guess PART 2 we find out the call in the bar was all a plan to get the wife separated and gang banged, filmed so he could blackmail them so he could get access to the wife ?????

At least the wife can say she finally got fucked by a man, a few of them

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Just Plain Cuck

NitpicNitpic8 months ago
Notice

Notice the author has been writing since 2004,he should have stopped then.

KevinTheEngineerKevinTheEngineer6 months ago

Love the neg comments. Why do they read Bob?

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Like all JPB’s stories it’s pot luck. With no tags you just don’t know what you’re gonna get, but there are significantly more willing cuck stories as this one is, than BTB so it’s probably safer not to bother unless of course the cuck shit gets you off.

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Just a Dirty Old Man (of course I have been one since I was thirteen)who likes to write about the things that I've seen and been exposed to in my life. There is a little bit of me in almost all of my stories and in some of them there is quite a lot. I leave it to the reader ...