All Comments on 'Mary's Adventure'

Kinda of a long setup, but the shower fantasy is great. It really picks up well about half-way through. Should consider getting to the hot parts quicker. But, great story!!

This story does go awhile before the sex starts. But this was a really fun story for me to write. A really cool couple I met here asked me to do a story for them, and gave me some of the details to use. They wanted some build-up before the harder stuff happened. So, this was my attempt at trying to build some intensity. I've gotten some feed back that they liked the story, but I really hope others like it too. Thanks for reading, and I'd love to hear your comments.

Very well written & I really enjoyed this tale. Thanks for sharing & good luck for your future projects.

Good story, but David had 2 different vehicles (A Jimmy at the beginning and a Jeep at the end)