by CyranoJ
Well done! That was a lot of poking fun (pun intended, of courses) at the genre and whatever else you were poking. OTOH, it was sexy as hell, and really literate and well-written to boot. Good luck in the contest, I hope you get enough votes for it - it deserves a serious run. :-)
Glad you enjoyed and your feedback is really appreciated.
That was nice and sexy fun! Nice twist with the nerd and the new girl hooking up as well. Well done.