All Comments on 'Making Room for the Art'

You have given this classic storyline a new twist and done very well. Next episode please!

I loved this story, well done! Only very slight criticism is yet again the ubiquitous tank top rears it head! There must be other items of clothing you could have used??

I shall try and wait for the next chapter. I hope you continue this story line. Thank you.

With all the "themed" stories on this site, whose popularity grew slowly or rapidly, such as "Babysitters", "Nurses", "Catholic Schoolgirl", "Sexy Nanny", and so on, I think you can legitimately claim that the numbers for "Cramped Back Seat" are on the rise. I will not be surprised when readers "look back" and realize just how many of them there actually are.

And yes, there isn't much room for variation (no pun intended), but there can be good "Cramped Back Seat" stories and GREAT "Cramped Back Seat stories". And they'll hopefully get better as more people venture into the genre. How about one where there are TWO females sharing the space?

First you said Andrew was in the back seat. Then he was on the phone in the front seat. Then you called him Matthew......

WOW - Hot, arousing a great intensity. All 3 got off in the back seat and the details are what made it all work. I hope another chapter is very soon in being posted. Hopefully, the 3 of them will do each other out in the open; really going at it and then the girls pair up and Andrew and Magda pair up to do her. Thanks .....

This was very nicely composed!

I've read the stories you mentioned at the beginning and I gotta say, this tops both of them combined. This was PERFECT. Yeah sure you mixed up the names but other than that it was pure gold 😍😍😍

That was great. What happens tomorrow?

I almost did not read this story as it may be overdone, but this was beautiful! Loved the third person AND how the three interacted.

I really enjoyed the story. You should add another cahpter as they were about to explore the lake.

Yep I sure was with who sat where and a few paragraphs in the story changed from a male perspective to female. Gave up at that point.

This story requires further exploration.

The concept is intriguing and arousing. I only wish it had greater length, variety and complexity. A longer trip would give the framework for more substance. Perhaps Aunt and Magda could exchange positions, or mom could participate too. Also, more kissing would be nice. A rest stop or restaurant along the way could provide some changes of scene, while leaving the focus on erotic backseat shenanigans. A lovely story with great potential for expansion.

Very arousing, and when one is aroused enough, a name mix up or other minor oops doesn't matter, The reader knows what is what and who is who. I am a naughty man and I let the story continue in my mind, letting the scenario of first Patrick then his wife also be seduced. The house by the lake is rockin in my mind, but both might be too much? If you continue this one maybe one or the other could get sucked in (pun intended) leaving an odd one out and clueless? In any case thank you for this story, I know the effort involved and appreciate yours. It really is good, I loved the watching part and could have heard much more description there but sometimes less can be better. I will have to keep an eye out for further works.

(10/22/2022) Short but sweet. I do love these Lap stories. Five stars.

I love sitting on the lap stories. This is a nice story, but not equal to some of the more erotic ones that I have read.