by silkstockingslover
This was super hot and you can't leave us hanging more... More..... MORE
Of course you must continue on. Chapter 2 will be a nasty threesome with son, daughter, and " mommy" with "mommy" getting her first taste of pussy. Chapter 3 could be Carol and Megan seducing Amber and Tiffany at the next card party. Finally, mini orgy with Carol and Simon joining Megan and her son and daughter.
Another super-hot fuck story as usual, SSL!! I look forward to reading your stuff - but always with my cock out so it doesn't get hung up in my undies when it gets rock hard. Your stuff ALWAYS is a cock-hardener and sometimes mine leaks in my shorts. You really have the fuck scene down - do you fuck as well as your heroines?????
This story requires a second chapter. Can we expect to see Simon & Jay swap mothers at some point? Excellent story, wish I could give it more than 5 stars.
should you choose to not continue with another chapter - or two - of this very hot story.
Will be looking for it, soon!
This was so horny it is one of the best stories I've read yet!!!!!!!!
I'm sure I speak for all your fans when I say we need more. This is a very hot story with tons of potential. Would love to see spin-offs with some of the characters in their own stories. 5 stars, fave story and absolutely drooling for more. Thanks for this.
Best regards; max052
A great story. Dam made me so horny and needing to cum. Please continue.
You can't leave us hanging now, it just came to the best part!!!
On a more serious note - what else but the best could we expect from you!? Another contest has me once more keeping my fingers crossed for you. The story itself was hot but slo delivered romantically conclusion and a great potential for more.
Nothing but a 5* will do!
Brilliant. Give us some more please and please introduce some watersports. Oh and the sister ;0)
It's so sweet when Jay and his mother get good looks at what the other's got between their legs they're excited as never before. Jay's mom "saw he was staring at my vagina with the same lust I was feeling for his cock." Of course--his own mother's vagina is the best thing any son can ever see, and mothers are always delighted when they discover the big fat mommy-pleaser their son is packing. Jay fucks his mother, and no surprise, it's the best fuck of his life of hers too. A word of advice to boys and their moms who're reading this. If they don't happen to have a camera handy, not to worry. The boy's penis fits up his mommy's vagina real fine anyway, and when the kid blows his young balls up inside her, both mother and son know that that's exactly where his warm creamy semen just fucking belongs.
well built and so horny
maybe more details about teasing and the foreplay will be so much better
Definitely another chapter is needed.
As usual a great story.
Oh hell yes I think y'all have a winner here please continue !
This was so fucking hot and what a cliffhanger too! I think we can all say this needs more chapters!!!
What a great story! This is one of your best, in my opinion. Hell, I had forgotten all about the daughter and the last line really hit the target! Thanks a million for this one and I sure hope you continue on with this scenario! It is surely a winner in my book!
As hot as ever and allow me to beg for this story to go on. More please more more more
I'd love to see a sequel to this. We need it to come full circle now that her daughter found out. Nothing like a nice family threesome!
Thank you - I had one of my best orgasms from this story it was so hot & very realistic
Ready for chapter 2 !!
IF WE HAD A BABY TOGETHER...... JAKE III
I truly did enjoy masturbating while reading your story and ask that you continue with another chapter.....
What a read, you have to do a Chapter 2 and 3.
Chapter 2 would be a meeting of the minds and bodies with the Carol and Simon in a "Double Fuck" session and Chapter 3 would be the daughter walking in on the session and joining in.
just the story I needed to have another orgasm... Thank you and more please
He should have taken her ass, with a bit of resistance from her.
This story deserves other one or two installments... involving the sister, and driving the plot far on the path of porn and incest. Hopefully with pregnancies :)
Please continue with the story another couple of chapters. One with daughter then one with the best friend/ son maybe even a baby with the sister or mom would be hot!
Well I don't think you need another one telling you to continue the story, since there's almost 50 comments already, but in case you haven't understood the message: please, please do another part! Or more than one!
I will make it 50....please add chapters 2 through 10. Loved it!!!
Very good start now continue and get daughter and your friend Carol and her son as well.
Sweet pound Mommy's cunt Sonny an deposit a few BIG LOADS in her... Baby maker for Good measure .
Holy fuck yes you need to continue this fuck tale!!!!!!!! I LOVE incest stories. Your stuff, SSL, is, without question, some of the most erection and ejaculation inducing stuff on the internet!!!!!! You must be the hottest fuck in the history of sex to come up with all this fucking nasty stuff - I just wish we could find a way to unite our sex organs and find out just what kind of a fuck we could generate!
Please add another chapter and have son fuck mother and sister in all three holes.
Fuck Yes, SSL - PLEASE cuntinue this masterpiece of fuckdom!!!!! Your stories keep my tired old cock rock hard until the end or until I cum before the end! You must be the hottest piece of ass that ever took a hard cock up your pussy the way you dash this outrageously fucking hot stuff off!!!! I can't imagine that you make up something you know nothing about so I have to assume you have experienced what you write about - and That means I wish I could experience it with you and have the wildest fuck of all time for me!
Keep writing it and I'll keep reading it, masturbating and cumming all over my computer screen! FUCK - your stuff is far and away the sexiest and hottest on Literotica!
Silk, I have read every word you have published and loved every one. Some more than others but even the worst one is better than most authors best. The quality of your character development, the depth of your storylines, and the emotions they provke combine in a way that has given me hours of enjoyment. You have opened my eyes to genres that previously have held little to no interest to me, and for that, thank you. I can think of no higher praise to an author than that. And now to the reason I feel compelled to comment after years of visiting this site. Silk you have allowed me into your thoughts, and I like to think that you take some of your inspiration from life experiences. You were somehow able to pull this story from my history. It was me outside the window with my 8mm camera, this was awhile ago. It was my best friend that was enjoying his mother. While it didn't play out quite as quickly as your story, it was the second time I got caught that we talked. That was at the beginning of summer and it took until the end of summer before she willingly played for my camera. Alas I don't have a sister but I have always wished I did. Ok, I think you get the point. I will be watching for more of this storyline to see how closely this story mirrors my experiences. I thank you again Silk, for all your hard work. I would also like to thank you too, for all the rock hard erections and glorious orgasms.
It's like those great movies you see and just know they left it set up for the sequel. So we await chapter two, and then there is always the friend who lent the movie, What's her story and will everyone get together to celebrate??
I absolutely love this story
i bet i could actually relate it to real life
Holy fuck, SSL, you are my favorite fuck author and you are really scoring again with this series! I am past 70 and cummed twice reading this - and my cock stays hard!!!!! I desperately need you to get another piece written so the whole fucking family gets into wildly fucking each other. This is probably on the "cusp" of being the most outrageous incest special in the history of writing - but you do these badass stories so fucking well you can pull off anything you can dream up and keep your readers' cocks erect and pussies wet.
FUCKON, darlin'!!!!!!
I thought the sister was going to come in when he shot all over mom and lick it off her while milking ever last drop out of him.
You can't end it there you have to have the sister and mom and son get together and maybe the brother and sister and then the mom catches them and she gets mad and she makes them fuck.for her great story line love keep writing
Great start to this story please keep it going. 5 stars! Wet and still need more.
JASMINE:
, YOU ARE AMAZING EACH STORY IS BETTER THAN THE NEXT, AND YOU ALWAYS SEEM TO LEAVE THE OPENING FOR THE SEQUEL. T YOUNG GIRL IN THE MOVIE JUST HAPPENS TO BE THE DAUGHTER, AND YOUR DAUGHTER JUST HAPPENS TO WALK IN AT THE END. WONDERFUL. YOU CAN ADD CAROL AND CAROL AND SIMON TO THE MIX AND POSSIBLY THE OTHER GIRLFRIENDS.
MIKE
JASMINE:
I ALSO JUST FINISHED READING :BACKSEAT MOMMY" YOU HAD SOME IDEAS FOR ADDITIONAL CHAPTERS, GO FOR IT, MOM CAN MOVE CLOSER TO THE COLLEGE AND BECOME THE HOUSE MOTHER/SLUT FOR HIS FRAT.
ALL OF THE TITLES YOU SUGGESTED ARED GREAT AS USUAL.
GO FOR IT
MIKE
This is just great! You KNOW the daughter has to become part of this!
So...MORE!
[thanks!!]
With the daughter. It was on my mind from the time of her description about how sexy her kids were.
Love the story a lot. You should cuntinue with it. This is a real fantasy of mine and you wrote it masterfully.
Would love to read more of the story!!!
Silkstoclongslover you are a very good writer. I'll let you imagine how very turned on reading this made me. Not to mention the huge happy ending.
More Please... thank Brad
first two pages were superb erotic writing but the build was so well done, the climax fizzled, the last page was a huge letdown. boom, it was over for me after this needless foreshadowing, what happened to the struggle?
"No words were spoken, and yet we both knew what was about to happen"
Excellent and erotic incest. I am ready for another good fucking with my little sissy transvestite mother fucking bitch.