All Comments on 'Lynn Makes Her Biggest Sale'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
The Sale Is The Thing

Sounds like the guys had a good time.

She got the big sale. Win/win.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
So she was a whore and sold things as payment for

being a sex toy to a group of men, big deal. IT happens every day in businesses and in government agencies. What is interesting is she has no thoughts of the physical and medical risk of what she did. As they say, stupid people do stupid things. One thing you need to do is get and editor and a proofreader. Your grip on the grammar and spelling isnt good. For instance, "Take it out of my pant.", which side of his pants was he wearing. I was constantly being stopped in the story flow to mentally correct your sentence structure or spelling. Then again if this is autobiographical then we can guess why whoring is needed to make sales.

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