All Comments on 'Lube Job'

Please, write part two asap; the story is great! The setting is totally original

and I think they make a great couple. I am having trouble writing

this because I was just getting warmed up but I can see so many

Great surprises in part two...maybe she's a virgin because she

Always takes it up the ass...then when she wants to go all

the way she gets kinda scared and gentle for a second..

maybe she isn't a virgin but she is like super tight from not doing

anything for a long time and he is totally surprised. .. hope

This inspires you a bit :)

Another great story.

My only beef is that 5'11" and 180 lbs would not be at all fat in the ways you described, more like plump.

Who _are_ you ? You are a really good writer.

5'11" and 180 lbs would not be nearly as fat as you described - try more like 280.

Your piece left us hanging which many times is effective. This story however left is incomplete. I encourage you to pen a chapter 2 or more.

Thanks