All Comments on 'Lin and the Good Boys Ch. 01'

He needs to leave lin with a baby bump in the near future

Sadly, Lin is in her early fifties, and therefore too old to get pregnant. As you'll see, in later chapters, she dreams of having his child.

This story absolutely boils over with subtle and not-so-subtle humor and the characters idiosyncrasies delight me ! You have a gift , an ability to imagine these odd scenarios that your characters find themselves in that play perfectly into their witty sarcastic personalities ! Truly very entertaining ! I can’t describe how much I enjoyed this story , but I’ve a feeling if I was a character in one of your stories you would have no problem at all describing my enjoyment ! Thank you tons for a fantastic escape !

Thanks for your kind and encouraging comment! This is one of my earliest stories. I want to tell the stories of real people responding to extraordinary circumstances. I'm working on improving my voice and skill in this. If you'd be so kind, take a look at my story "Surprise!" and let me know if you think I'm making progress.