All Comments on 'Kendra Wants to Lose Her Virginity'

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WatcherRobWatcherRobover 7 years ago
Nicely written.

Switching personas got me confused a few times. I found it believable and enjoyable.Could it be real? Hope so.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

The guy seems like kind of a douchebag.

AnonymousAnonymous18 days ago

It seems that the author was completing a checklist - he missed character development and realist dialogue, both of which are essential.

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