All Comments on 'Jenny'

I thikn Service was a better story, and it has a lot of similarities with this one. Besides this one is incomplete.

Still, it's pretty good.

- JT

Concept was ideal for all siblings to get it on. Who got Emily's cherry? Keep the story going, and where are brothers and grandparents? ENJOYED!!!!!!!!!!!

"I can't believe how delicious your pussy is," John said. "It's like nectar of the gods, ambrosia." -- no real person would ever say this!!!

the interaction between Jenny, John and their friends - a lot of that was hot; but I'm not sure I liked it as much when the parents got involved.

the interaction between Jenny, John and their friends - a lot of that was hot; but I'm not sure I liked it as much when the parents got involved.

Well - John can go down on me as many times as he likes - that is one thing I really love - and I also love to deepthroat - I think some more people can get involved here though - maybe grandparents, uncles and aunts etc - that will make some great reading - Thank you

me and my girlfriend read this and we both got so worked up that we couldnt help but fuck right where we were. keep going. you're an amazing author

Perfect except for a few typos! "Fred and Sheila are pretty neat too, aren't they?" Sheila asked, squirming out from under John and sitting up. << Should be Jenny asked!>> But other than that it was perfect! Definitly steamy! A+++

This is by far the best erotic story I've read. Such a turn on all the way through. Though please please Submit the rest!!

wow,i loved this storybut i think it should have been divided into two.one of the kids at home with thier friends,then the other of the families at the camp site.still,i had a hardon for most of the story which means that it was hard for ages.great..

This story weirdly made me horny. I just wish it was finished:( I wanna see what happens next!!!

~Jazzy

Where did the students get all of that money to pay brother and sister. Then the story got better at the camp, evcept at the end wher you put a black man in the picture. That was terrible. Shame!!

The swinging and multiple partners fucked the story up once again.

once again you ruin a story no girl that found out her brother was watching her and charging his friends to let them watch also would ever let it continue she would tell him she wanted all the money he got and he was never to do it again or she would tell thier parents and all his friends parents as well keep it atleast sounding realistic and believable please

Didn't enjoy it as much as some of your other stories... A few points:

1) You're writing 18 and 19 year olds as if they're 13 or 14. Far too innocent, it's unrealistic. 18 and 19 year olds don't call their parents mommy and daddy, and they certainly don't refer to penises as "things". Most every single attractive 18 or 19 year old guy and girl is going to have some sexual experience. Unless this story is set in the 50's, that is, but somehow I doubt it. And also? 18 and 19 year olds are generally fully sexually developed. You're going on as if having breasts or a full sized penis at 18 is something unusual, and that's just not the case.

2) Your use of sucking pussy is far too prevalent. It's jarring, because in general people don't say they are "sucking" pussy unless they are literally sucking cum out of it. They either say "licking" or "eating" pussy.

3) Every single woman in your stories seems to squirt when they cum. This is generally pretty rare, so it comes off sounding kinda silly.

Title just to get everyone's attention. First great story. Now there are very very few 18 and 19 year ols that would be that innocent but you have to realize that there are. I have met 1 of them myself. Second can we lynch the racist. Look get over yourself as far as I am concerned if my beautiful white little girl wants to bring home a black boy more power to her. Now I am gonna catch hell for this next one, but black not a nigger. There is a difference people and there are white niggers too hell there are all races of them. I don't care for the term but someone come up with a better one. Even Jamocoa one of my closest friends who is black will tell u the same thing along with his parents and all of their friends. Back to the story come on part two what happens with them during the rest of camp and when tey get back home? Don't leave us hanging!

why does it matter if its realistic or not? its olny for entertainment and for fuck sakes its fictonial

it was a wonderfull, loving, respectfull story. lots of love and no violence...my favorite kind...

Thank You

great story for the most part I love it thanks

I really enjoyed this story, thank you.

just wish it was a little longer .... at least lasted til the end of the vacation and they went home lol

Enjoyed this one, as well as your others.

Enjoyed this very much, Hope you will write some more about this family or about another family who like this type of sex

i wish there were more summer camps like this for no strings attached healthy sex between adults, ANY adults, from 18 to 98 as long as they consent, why not? Thanks for a great 5 star story.

awesome story... I wish you kept going with the bro-sis spying part, and made the camp part a different story... but all in all I really enjoyed it!

The story was ok untill you started adding the whole group thing in at the camp. Oh and watch your repetition there was at least one paragraph that had 'cock' used like eight times. I understand this is supposed to be erotica but come on there are other words to use.

Too Much!!

the narrator is big for his age at 18? i stopped growing (taller, anyway) when i was 16, and I'm six foot four.

family orgies are waste

I nutted 4 times to this story - this is the kind of family I would love to be part of - OH MY! Please continue submitting stories

But it just carried on way to long to make it enjoyable. I started getting tired of the redundant sex happenings. A little more story and a little less sex. Don't get me wrong I love sex but you can only eat lobster so many days and then you need to have a steak.

I fully disagree with the previous criticisms. This was an awesome story that had me hard as a rock as I read it. I loved every part of the sexual experience and the children dragging their parents and other adults into their sex life. It was great that you deflowered a virgin in the end, loved that touch. Would have love to have Dad deflower Emily in the end, that would have been a fine closing touch.

Please write a followup to this and let me know how the kids are doing! I want more!

I want to know who got who pregnant?

Great story! I'd love to read a part two with resolution. Also, just as a point of curiosity your stories start with concern about getting pregnant and that leaves over time. Would anyone or all the women have been seeded?

I never even fantasized about having sex with my parents until very recently. Now I wish I had.

Never thought about incest in the way i am right now.maybe ill go to easter after all!!

A Part 2 wouldn't go amiss here !

This is one hot story !!!!!!!!!!

That was the hottest fucking thing I have ever read, please keep them cumming.

This is the best story on literotica PERIOD. I will definitely be looking for a part 2.

loved every page

This is THE hottest story I have ever read on Literotica! I have read other stories you have done but none comes close to this one. Outstanding in all aspects! I come so hard every time I read it. So glad I found this story.

The thought of having girls pay to to suck John's cock got me off big time! While we're at it, for another $20.00 they could have John fuck them with his huge cock. I wanna be John. Erotica at it's best!

Loved it! Please keep wrighting.

I am one very old reader of literotica and this is not the 1st or 2nd time I am done reading it completely. I should have commented earlier, but I don't have my account then and don't want to comment as anonymous(Most of the time I doesn't have enough energy left in me to comment, but I can't say it loud) . Erotica has different meaning to different people, some choose hard sex, where some are fond of soft romace. There are also a few who liked both depending on time and I have no doubt this is the story that I always come back to whenever I am super horny and need a few good releases. I wonder if someone decides to make a porn on this script. A 20 dvd porn maybe. One hell of a story. I am thankful not all the stories are like this or a few readers may die due to having excessive orgasms. Lol.

I read this story from beginning to end. Fantastic story!

I don't know what to say that hasn't been said. Only in a perfect world.

one of the longest i read but one of the best a real fuck fest loved every drop of it

I want to go to camp too.

Who fucked Emily

It jumped without much reason from the bedroom wall and the siblings to camping with the parents and everyone else. A long story (which is your thing), but with major parts left out of the middle.

If you're going to do that, please put it in the tags so I'll know not to waste my time on a good story that has an ending that'll really piss me off.

Jenny, Jenny, who can I turn to? You give me something I can hold on to. I know you think I'm like the other before, who saw your name and number on the wall. 867-5309, 867-5309.

I came thirty-two times reading this story, maybe it was thirty-one, after fifteen I really lost count

Jenny u made me come n times. U r a dream girl anytime ready to get fucked q5

Very cool and i found it more realistic than many would believe.

I want to do the things Jenny had done to her with my step daughter. She is called Jenny too and I always look at photos of her when I masturbate over this story.

My god the amount of cum I have spilt over my Jenny!

Wow-what an amazing story loved the way they got their parents and friends to play with them too.

you really have a devious mind.

I think the worl would be a better place if it acted like the people in this story. Like the “hippies” use to say,

Make love NOT war.

One of the best stories I've cum across. I can't make it to the end of the story without cumming all over the place. I take my time reading and slowly jerk off until I can't hold it back any longer

This outstanding story has only one flaw- the ending, which is far too abrupt. The final scene is left unresolved and certainly seems incomplete. However, this is not enough to deny the author a much-deserved Five Stars for this story.

I seriously think I'm looking forward to the next part of this adventure

Shorty Mack I agree with you make love not wat wonderful story would love to live it more please 10 stars

I loved the story BUT did you think about birth Controle.

Porn stories are supposed to be fantasies but it is still stretching suspension of disbelief that everything happens exactly as characters want with no thinking.

I can only assume this takes place in a world where babies don't come from sex as the brother had heard of mythology "nectar of the gods" but not a single person even mentioned the concept of pregnancy.

Love was also looked down as to be avoided which would lead to a society where after everyone gets pregnant all the babies would be abandoned because without attachment nobody would care for children.

Also money apparently comes from sex.

Next time you wish to challenge readers with more open minded views about sex, at least have it play out as realistically as Star Trek?

It's not incest that is offensive-- the internet is proof that everyone is able to think of that kink-- but brainless characters are really annoying.

A better written story would put thought into answering the question of pregnancy and raising society and navigating attachment and jealousy.

You don't have to solve the national deficit or be very good at economics to think of a decent sex society fantasy world, it would work in Soviet Russia or on Mars, but it would be much more impressive to explain Why the characters choose to find traditional religious morals unsatisfying and choose in full knowledge to break the rules and sin, trusting their own judgments instead of following the authority.

Other authors on this website have been daring enough to make sex fantasies more complicated and more interesting.

It doesn't need many details, but you were not able to show any of your characters as having maturity surpassing that of a well read 9 yr old.

Re-read the story of Lot's daughters for an example where intelligent adult human beings can be driven to incest in a world that bears passing resemblance to ours. Or watch American Pie.

I mean it's actually not hard to come up with an argument for it.

You just literally forgot the condom.

excellent read, will read again