by Spector_Dugan
Very hot with Sierra! However, it was far more "about time" we saw the aliens regarding what/why happened to lead to this--and we need to read more about it. Made sense they had to be observing them. Now we hope to be reading (soon) about if they let them aboard other areas of the ship for any recreation, looking out the ports, etc., and what the alien's plans are, what kind of planet, what they will be done, etc. There will have to be some kind of education imparted to them unless it will be a garden paradise without hazards. 5
This sounded as if it was the last one.... I hope not as they have been fun reads. Thank you for sharing.
The tension between denial and final acceptance was well done. Brought the excitement to a higher level. Well done!
I’m glad you included some bigger picture as to why this is all happening. Not my favorite series plot wise tbh but as always very well written. Looking forward to the next story
Wonder what happened to Ben from Part 8, e.g., why was he alone, what goes on between Emma and Grayson, etc.
Good episode, nice to finally get more of the context for the couplings. Look forward to reading more, and learning more about this scenario.
Gripping sci-fi thriller from start to finish, with great characters. The story is very well-written, a five stars story all the way.
Since you described it as the epilogue, I suppose that's the end of things ... after all, there's only so long you could bring this, I guess. I can't say I haven't been enjoying the ride.
I hope that this reemerges with a continuation of sorts and furthering of the couples and how they carry on with their lives
You must be joking. This is the ending? Good lord, a couple of these were somewhat good and I kept hoping that there was going to be some resolution and closure or something. Instead this? Wow. What a letdown
So they put Ben in the same cell as his faithless girlfriend and equally faithless best friend...to torture him? Why? How did that help save the fragment of humanity that was left? It's pretty clear you had bigger plans for this, so I'm going to hope you eventually have the time and inclination to wrap it up a bit more satisfyingly. This was...pretty anticlimactic and...kinda empty feeling, really. Still 5* because it was fun and hot, but...yeah. Not my fave.
Now there is birthing, swapping, making up, home making, child-rearing and all those other things that go along with copulating. Should be enough stories here to emulate the rise and fall of the Roman Empire.
These aliens are really incompetent. The least they could do is clean up the survivors' genetics so they don't die out from inbreeding errors in a couple hundred years.