by Spector_Dugan
Loved this Chapter! At first was a little hesitant with how angry Evan was and how forceful it was, but you really turned it around well! How they ended up being happy with each other was really sweet and made the sex much hotter! Looking forward to the next chapter
Disappointing
I don't understand this series. It's like SD had a great idea for a story, End of the world aliens save some people and they have to save the human race. Sounds cool right. I read the prologue (Ch.00) and thought this could be interesting with a premise like that... Then after the first two chapters I feel like SD turned the idea over to one of those horrible porn writers from the 70's or 80's all that's missing is the cheesy saxophone music and the Bom Chika Wa Wow. I maybe had too high of hope for this, so what I'm reading is just falling too flat. IDK. I have enjoyed so many SD stories that I still want to give this a chance, but my hopes have dip quite low so far.
Still Thanks for Sharing just because this isn't a hit with me doesn't mean others wont like it. Looking forward to your next big hit.
I loved how this progressed! I was worried from the start it might be a mean story, but then it turned so sweet! Wonderful job!
This is definitely a different kind of story. I think as we get more chapters we will see there is a reason to the pairings. Til then just sit back and enjoy the ride. Thanks for sharing
This series has turned out to be something very different from what I expected from the setup in Pt. 00, and I love it. The amount of characterization you manage to fit into these little vignettes is bonkers and makes it so hot when the characters finally give in. Regardless of whether you keep this focused on these individual interludes or start exploring what comes after, I'm 100% along for the ride.
I really think you should consider releasing more content at once or at least more frequently. The chapters in this story don't have a lot of content compared to the chapters in your other stories.
Really like the different aspects of humanity you are exploring with the different couples. Keep up the good work.
Wow that was super hott! I hope she conceives! Hope for a follow-up on these two especially with her Impending pregnancy progress!
Is it cheating if your husband's dead? If Ms. Collins is a widow, then it isn't cheating. Technically, Evan and Ms. Collins are no longer teacher and student. They're survivors and their baby, boy or girl, will be the continuation of the species___which for all intents and purposes___except for those on the alien ship___is extinct.
The glimpse into Evans home life was quite touching, it really humanised him. Good insight into his motivations and psychology.
Ehh not very turned on by this chapter, sub-par compared to the previous two
Really enjoyed this chapter & the way Evan & Ms Collins realised their joint needs.
Teenage boy wrote this fantasy crap. Evan is a moppy loser no way a Ms Collins would be interested in real life.
Evan needs to die. Kinda pisses me off that an irredeemable character like Evan suddenly is desirable because of the fact that he is a complete psycho POS. Full on horse shit.
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I like the revelation of the reason behind Evan's attitude...it reminds me of Judd Nelson in John Hughes' The Breakfast Club.
I mean, let’s call a spade a spade: Evan raped his teacher. From the little we have learned of him, his mom was RIGHT to abandon him.
It’s ok to have anger and abandonment issues. That happens and manifests poorly. But most people on this planet do not care one way or the other about a single individual. So his paranoia that everyone is out to get him proves that he is as dumb as a turnip. I cannot see a single Saint or deity that would last a minute in discussion before tossing his ass to the trash.
Wow. Is this ripped from the menwritingwomen sub? Yep. Just stick it in the ass with barely any lube without consent and they’ll just fall in love with you. Totally. Definitely how that works.
Did NOT like the anal part at all! I would be screaming, crying, and bleeding if someone did that to me.
Science fiction is not my favorite genre, however the sex is very hot. The taming of a teacher theme has resonance with her helpless situation...at first!