All Comments on 'I Remember Bethany Ch. 03 (Illustrated)'

The illustrations are hideous.

I beg to differ from the previous reader. The story isn't at all bad, and the illustrations are better than most.

What a "waste"!!!!

This is a very sexy, intelligent, interesting and loving story. I hope he wins in DC and wherever he goes and she comes to visit. Love is wonderful.

Well done

Enjoyed it very much, memories of a different sort, but similar.

I like the interracial story, but it has too much of the stereotype large black tool. But that is what most of us look for. The story is fine, but the pics are all out of proportion. Again, maybe this is what we look for. But then I have a fetish for the black woman/white man, maybe in a more romantic setting. Good work.

Really enjoyable. Nice work. Hot and sweet and smart. Two thumbs up!

free sample:

http://www.smashwords.com/books/view/26448