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Carnes8004Carnes80042 months ago

Great story. Stay safe.

Boyd PercyBoyd Percy2 months ago

Ain't love grand! Started off with bloodied noses and ended up married with children.

5

HarddaysknightHarddaysknight2 months ago

This was an old fashioned romance and a very good one. Nice story!

PierremanvisPierremanvis2 months ago

Fine writing, excellent theme and a really wonderful read . Many thanks.

SouthernCrossfireSouthernCrossfire2 months ago

Thanks for another great story, q, leaving me hoping for a happy ending the whole time as I seriously doubted that there would be one. The end summed it up quite well. 5*

Monagamous_NowMonagamous_Now2 months ago

Excellent! Thank you!

Bargyn1Bargyn12 months ago

All is good in love and war! Excellent!

Cracker270Cracker2702 months ago

Damn but that was a very enjoyable story. Technically correct and a perfect feel good story line. Thank you.

FlamethrowFlamethrow2 months ago

An excellent story, as expected

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

Wonderful story, Randi, 15 stars! Alice was a little snob, until she unknowingly met her "husband". She really loved him, and surprised him when she said they were going to put kids in the house. Alice's mother knew she'd met her son-in-law, the first time she met him! Also, nice to mention rural areas...

Please write more, SOON, we need another VAGABONDS! You are the best!!

AerographerAerographer2 months ago

Another great story; by the master storyteller. Please bring another forward asap. Thanks for sharing!

pjpbpjpb2 months ago

5/5 - well written, nice reading

Only complaint: wrong category, it belongs in Romance

gatorhermitgatorhermit2 months ago
Another Excellent Romance!

Really liked the dialogue in this story. Funny but realistic. I have a feeling that this couple will pop out some really interesting rug rats and have some great times so doing. Great story!

ca_daveca_dave2 months ago

So well done Thank you for sharing.

Bronco56Bronco562 months ago

Excellent, very enjoyable

5stars

hindsight2020hindsight20202 months ago

Was good but not great.

⭐⭐⭐

Why drop the "ten years in the making" thing if you were not going to use.

nestorb30nestorb302 months ago

"I never really liked Alice, but she was pretty easy to love." Best line ever, thanks for writing, really enjoyed it

demanderdemander2 months ago

Over the top, but a masterpiece. D

linnearlinnear2 months ago

One hell of a story, I start smiling every time I see that you've released a new story.

The_Sheppards_CorrectionThe_Sheppards_Correction2 months ago

Another great story! I miss your longer, multi-chapter tales, but enjoyed this as it is. Well done! Finn

Freddog6601Freddog66012 months ago

Well done. Enjoyable read.

A modern Taming of The Schrew.

NorthJerseyLearnerNorthJerseyLearner2 months ago

Enjoyed reading the story. Thank you.😊

stewartbstewartb2 months ago

This story .... WHAT A HOOT !

ttjbjr54ttjbjr542 months ago

Great story and an easy read. Well written. Love a story with a happy ending. Well done.

willyk1212willyk12122 months ago

good ending goes to show you all women arn't sluts 5 stars

NickTeeNickTee2 months ago

It was full of spelling mistakes, gramatical errors and god knows what else but it was also the best so far in this writealong. Well done despite all of the above it was perfect ☆☆☆☆☆ from me

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

Thank you for the story. It's good but I wish it were more in-depth, with more romance and character development. Alice's character especially lacks depth, which is a shame, since she's naturally a complex character. I guess this is as far as you wanted to go with it.

Jalibar62Jalibar622 months ago

Probably just me, but I never really felt that Alice became likable. But you did say that in your closing line. I did like Sasha though, it was sad to see her move away.

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

Really good. Loved the mutual nose breaking. The inability to express true feelings, while juvenile, is believable.

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

Gotta love a spirited, rambunctious pair like these guys! 5*s.

WargamerWargamer2 months ago

Another brilliant story from you. You hardly fail at telling great yarns and l thoroughly enjoy them.

Scores a well deserved 5/5

crazymike45crazymike452 months ago

I loved this story. I've known people like the MCs. The characters were written so well.

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

The premise of the story was pretty obvious, NOT that it is a problem. The way you treated it is what makes it a gem. Thanks for another great read!

UncleFester623UncleFester6232 months ago

What a great love story!

WorcoWorco2 months ago

I've always liked your style. Again, you don't disappoint.

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

Another great story. My only complaint was that it ended too quickly.

FuddyDuddyDudeFuddyDuddyDude2 months ago

Fabulous story. I loved it, I don't have allergies but my eyes are welling...

Well written!!

FDD

muddman74muddman742 months ago

Great story, Q. Thank you for sharing with us! 5 stars

mithanialmithanial2 months ago

Fun story thanks for sharing.

BuzzCzarBuzzCzar2 months ago

You are a fine storyteller. 5*

AlluredAllured2 months ago

It's always a pleasure to read stories of authors whose works makes reading on this site such a joy. Another great read!! Thank You qhml1

Olderman318Olderman318about 2 months ago

I always love your work.

I don’t think I’ve given anything you write less than 5⭐️

Thank you sir.

Ravey19Ravey19about 2 months ago

A fine story. You got me, there I was thinking it's going to be a Wham, Bang, Thank you, Ma'am story and you changed it. A few gremlins here and there but not enough to detract from another great story. Thank you. 5⛤

MattblackUKMattblackUKabout 2 months ago

Interesting exploration of the theme. 5* romance.

rbloch66rbloch66about 2 months ago

Despite hostilities, it was a rather sweet story. In my opinion, it could have detailed their post-wedding life a little bit more, but that’s me being greedy.

goodshoes2goodshoes2about 2 months ago

Surprise, surprise. Good laugh at the end. Never know what life dishes out to you. 5 stars.

dgfergiedgfergieabout 2 months ago

Never really liked but kinda loved her after a few years. A good tale about love and hate, good people and bad, thoughtful people and assholes. The world is full of all kinds. Live and let live, it's a lot easier to love than to hate. Very well told tale. It doesn't cost anything to be thoughtful and nice. 5 stars

lAnatomistelAnatomisteabout 2 months ago

Sorry I can't award the number of stars this deserves - easy a 10-star ROMANCE!

OBTW, any lady with a '66 Mustang is great in my book! (We bought my wife one just after we got married - of course it was just a 6-year-old used car, at the time. ;^) ;^) )

brian_scoobybrian_scoobyabout 2 months ago

Another great story! …so well written and enjoyed ‘o so much! Thank-you for your talent!

Omart57Omart57about 2 months ago

Freakin Awesome, Q! Thank you!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

A really enjoyable read. And a loving wife to boot. Five stars for sure.

JPB NOT BOB

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

I parrot a commenter a few hours ago who said some authors make reading stories on this site a joy. And, of course, a is one of the foremost. Hear Hear!

JPB NOT BOB

IEnjoyEroticaIEnjoyEroticaabout 2 months ago

When I saw the author's name, I knew it would be a great story.

jlg07jlg07about 2 months ago

A great taming of the shrew story! Well done. 5*

TrambakTrambakabout 2 months ago

A lot of fireworks. Great details, and a great couple!!

Demosthenes384bcDemosthenes384bcabout 2 months ago

Should have been in romance genre as I don’t get a warm fuzzy reading EC stories - LOL! Great job! 4.8*

oldtwitoldtwitabout 2 months ago

Now what really nice change, a happy, fun story for a change.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

An interesting if obnoxious Romance story. And rather absurd. She's got a screaming asshole for a father, a strong intelligent woman for a mother, and a schizophrenic personality, until she gets fucked into submission and good manners. Kind of ironic and silly. Hope that's what you were going for. Thanks for the seminar on trees. Wish it was accurate.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

Well, we certainly learned a lot about the various wood types and forest cutting. 3*

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

Very enjoyable and as usual really well written. But it feels way to sparse on details e.g. her parents and how he got on with them. There are many more I could list. The ending again wS too brief and didn't have the same punch as the beginning. When I saw a new QHML story I got excited and finished this feeling a bit let down. BardnotBard

BSreaderBSreaderabout 2 months ago
It

Turned out better than I thought it was going to be. Great job thank you

WhoGivesAShitWhoGivesAShitabout 2 months ago

Fun reading, nice stuff.

MVarroMVarroabout 2 months ago

One of your signature shorts (and sweets) 5* It takes an intelligent man to keep a strong woman.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

Great read and best in show...

...for a surprisingly good invitational. They usually are comprised of 2nd tier stories from great authors, perhaps due to deadline.

Special bonus from this event - we got to see Mr. Tedious crack the door to his closet.

012Say012Sayabout 2 months ago

Loved the last line. 5 for that alone.

rodryder44rodryder44about 2 months ago

Very nice story about how opposites attract each other. I wish the story were longer as the characters were really terrific. Four stars.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

5*

The only thing missing is a Black Walnut paddle (to ensure she behaves) (or assures that she misbehaves).

[Foghorn]

oldmanbill69oldmanbill69about 1 month ago

Adding another fav. !

DukeofPaducahDukeofPaducahabout 1 month ago

The oil and water mix of personalities ended up as a fine emulsion. I hope they continue to remember to shake well for best results.

The depiction of their ‘sexy time’ was outstanding.

Very nice! — Borat

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

A nice little enjoyable story. You should write in this category a little more often. Thanks for your time and all the effort you’ve put in over the years. KS

Archie58Archie58about 1 month ago

Love it, but it could have been more: An Unexpected Reaction, Food Desert, Let Go.... Enjoy all of them, most more than once!

DazzyDDazzyD24 days ago

Elite means well beyond the standard fare, I have a category for the Elite stories. Your nom De plume takes up uses many spaces on said list!

I am a “hill William “ from west of AVL. I reside in Concord, you are one of the authors I would like to meet!

I am weird but not harmful. Cheers to you and yours,

AnonymousAnonymous22 days ago

I doubt few would argue, Q is the best writer on this site. Thank you sir. 5 stars

somewhere east of Omaha

fishgetterfishgetter18 days ago

5+ *s This has to be one of, if not the best, story I have read here, and I have read Many. Thanks for this one, and all you have written.

pummel187pummel18714 days ago

Did anyone else find it very disturbing that neither one of them said a single kind or loving word to each other???? and he has balls, he was a bigger DOUCHEBAG

AnonymousAnonymous6 days ago

Really nice and romantic.

AnonymousAnonymous3 days ago

damn,i wasn't expecting that . very,very good !!1

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