All Comments on 'How I Became Daddy's Slutty Slave'
by VeX_1138
- 55 Comments
Anonymousover 14 years agoThere's really no difference from this story and the ones told by other sick assholes like this author . Anyone who enjoys writing about rape and forced sex undoubtedly has a serious mental problem and should be avoided at all costs . I was hoping that the eldest daughter would slit his throat while he was sleeping and take off with her sister to the nearest police station but...our sick author had different ideas .
motherfucker74over 14 years agoOh and in addition to that, it was one HOT ASS STORY!!!
kittenloveover 14 years agoI did enjoy it a lot. :D.
if you need an editor, I'm always free to do it. just drop me a line in my profile. :).
kittenloveover 14 years agoI did enjoy it a lot. :D.
if you need an editor, I'm always free to do it. just drop me a line in my profile. :).
Anonymousover 14 years agoRight, only YOU are allowed to have an opinion, asshole.
keairanover 14 years agoThe minor technical glitches in the grammar and what-not did not detract from this story at all. As to the people who talk about rape/whatever. This site has a complete and entire section dedicated to rape/nonconsentual sex. If you don't like the subject matter, don't read it.
Anonymousover 14 years agoShould have been in BDSM instead of Incest. Some of us do not get into pain and that is where I stopped reading. Stopped before the crap hit the 'Fan'.!
Anonymousover 14 years agotalented but too into pain and humiliation for me.... despite my love of non consensual stories.... bummer....
Anonymousover 14 years agoThis story was very well written indeed. Do not pay any attention to these idiots. Half cry and bitch because they do no like the BDSM aspect and call rape depraved. I didn't see rape I saw her give herself willingly. Moreover, the cry about how rape is bad yet they are reading in the INCEST section-how hypocritical. These type of comments (i.e. rape is bad yet they are in the incest section) are not fit to see on the screen and are a waste of time to the writer and other readers. Get a life people who comment such as this. As for the grammar, I didn't notice any problems really. There may always be slight grammatical errors in some stories but these stories are not written to be perfect prose by any means. So brush these silly comments off as well. Id just spell and grammar check them and leave it at that. Not sure if they are referring to verb tense usage or what is their problem.
Now for the brief comments to the writer, the story has a very well driven plot, nice buildup and length of the story is just right for a tease type story. The twist at the end was very nice and enjoyable. This story is not written as a series story and so the length was good. Myself I prefer somewhat longer stories that go on for about 3-4 literotica pages but thats me. The length was good though for most readers. Also most readers here do not have a graduate degree level education so the length of 2-3 lit pages is good for the reader and audience. Keep up the writing and by no means let the other 3rd grade education comments set you back. Very well written indeed and I look forward to more from you. Thank you and job well done!!!
Naughtydad469over 13 years agoI am so glad that you got writer's block and produced this story! I have a "daughter" that will love this. She has wanted to be daddy's slut, too. We have fantasies of her in grocery stores, short skirt, and no panties to seduce other dad's and mom's. then have her please them in the parking lot or behind the store.
Very well written! Please post more!
iteachu559@gmail.com
Anonymousover 13 years agoI liked the story, it was written very well. Hope to read more of your stories. Can you write something a bit different? I like some incest stories, but this was a bit to much for me.
Anonymousalmost 13 years agoIf I could I would take every father-daughter (sex) relationship on the planet and burn it until they were all dead.
Father and daughter is fucking sick, however mother son it fine
Anonymousalmost 13 years agoFather daughter wrong but mother and son fine you really are a grade A moron!
Liked the story little OTT for my personal taste but not bad on the whole.
Anonymousover 12 years agoand you're shit for writing it. Was not erotic at all, just humiliating and degrating. people on this site who get off on this kinda shit are sick fucks as well. Spare all the rest who are looking for erotic incest stories your crap and don't write anymore stories like this.
Anonymousover 12 years agoIt was too much, I read through to the end hoping she'll escape but that never happened. It was kinda sad really.
Anonymousover 12 years agoThis story is fucked up an made me sad to read. It made me feel sick to my stomach to read it. It made me want to kill myself
Anonymousover 12 years agoCouldn't stop fingering myself.. Came before I got to the end of the first page!
Rifraff123almost 12 years agoWell done, had me hard as a rock, visions dancing in my head. What will Charlene do with her new toy?
Anonymousover 11 years agoits too much dramatic. the girl seems to be dumb. the plot is fucked up
Anonymousover 11 years agoawful! absolutely awful!
next time it should be in non-consent or bdsm
Anonymousover 11 years agoIn the end she could have broken the deal with him so y didn't she she didn't have to do the Charlene stuff
Fiamma1991over 11 years agoI was thinking the whole time of how I would do the same thing for my siblings. The sex scenes were hot, but how Charlie fucked her over in the end and had no gratitude for her sister at all, seriously pissed me off. Good story overall though.
Anonymousabout 11 years agoWonderful story. I do agree with one of the other comments said. It's funny how people come on here and complain about how 'wrong' the non-consent or BDSM aspect of it when they are reading stories in the 'incest' section. It's all fiction people. It's meant for entertainment. If you don't like it then don't read it!!!
Anonymousabout 11 years agoThe plot sucks, this is a horrible story, very disappointing, sick and absurd, please never write anything else ever again.
Anonymousalmost 11 years agoso i can read it. But I do like the themes of degradation so I just have to keep ignoring the part that I disagree with
Anonymousover 10 years agoIT'S A SHAME H HOW AUTHORS NOWADAYS SEEM TO WRITE STORIES THAT DEGRADE AND HUMILIATE WOMAN TO THE UTMOST.
Anonymousabout 10 years agoThat story was freaking insane...it held my attention the entire time....I mean as sad as it sounds I was impressed with your control of the storyline.you never permitted it to stray but never took it into the "beyond the beyond"point...truly impressive
Anonymousabout 10 years agoIt could have been better.i would have wrote better.tis story isn't even realistic enough.
Anonymousalmost 10 years agoI will never understand why jackasses read a story knowing that the title gives a clear description of what the story is about then comment on how its bad but that aside it is a great story
Anonymousalmost 9 years agoI expected her be a virgin. Yes she was anally but not vaginally.
Not happy. So I gave you a 1 star. Would of been 0, but there is no
Option for 0. Move it out of virgin. Now.
Anonymousover 8 years agoI would love a part 2. I thought it was great. I had a different experience with my dad. I am told its not uncommon but have known only a few women who speak openly about it most of the had bad experiences. after years of flirting and cuddling i made the first real move
Anonymousover 7 years agoI LOVED that twist at the end. This story and your descriptiveness made me so hard! Thank you!
Anonymousalmost 7 years agoSo she went through all that for her sister just to get betrayed and suddenly turn into a slut who's happy with her sad situation right now? Feel really bad for her cause she doesn't even have a happy ending.
Anonymousabout 6 years ago1. Poor ending - "I loved every minute of it." what was going through your mind, that would not be the case.
2. The sister would be the Mistress in this case.
3.There should have been a second chapter if not a third, about what happen after night the story ends. The baby being born and more. The writer of this story drop the ball on this store in a major way
Anonymousabout 6 years agoZero reason she did not take her sister and leave at 16 and 19 they were old enough. The sperm donor called daddy is just a sick criminal. Neither are dominates they are psychopaths with no empathy. How a father could just instantly turn on his daughter and treat her like shot for years is crazy and that is not how real dominate/submissive are especially when there should be love and trust. The younger sister at the end was just over the top she is an evil bitch no clue why she didn't just walk out. Then to set her up to get pregnant when the younger sister obviously always wanted the dad herself. Why??? Humiliation and domination is great in a scene but to treat your own child like this all the time is just a sick person. She should have taken the double ended dildo and fucked them both in the ass and left
