All Comments on 'Hot Summer Housework with Mom'

Well done a great story. I love consenting incest stories, no forcing , no pregnancy just pure lust and love. Keep up the good work. 10/10

That was so fucking hot! Please write more. New stories or sequels.

Loved that .A very HOT story .More Please!

Nasty.

I have many more stories to come. Just wish i could write them faster.

Holy crap that was hot!

You definitely need to write more stories like this. The lead-up and teasing was great and the pay-off at the end was awesome. Keep up the writing!

5*s

Eddie_King,

You are an excellent writer! Your descriptions, especially of the "good" parts, are exceptional!

I'm Italian and I could without the armpit hair. Joke....how can you tell it's an Italian airplane? By the hair under the wings. :)

Your first consensual mother/son incest is a masterpiece!! Keep 'em cumming! ;)

Great story loved the licking of arm pits next maybe some pee

damn I am so worked up-will force myself to wait till my wife gets home-she will wonder what got me so damned hot to trot

great job one of the best I have ever read on Literotica

Was this really your first story?! This is right up there with the best incest stories I've ever read on this site!

Very much looking forward to what you come up with in the future!

I loved the story. A bit more teasing than I could stand but Mom gave it up bless her.

Realistic situation and very good descriptions. Many guys have been aroused by mom in yoga pants, unfortunately for most they are left to jo to the mental image..

Loved the plot, the writing, the length and everything about this story! Smoking hot!! Five stars and a favorite point!

the ending was a turn off, cumming in her ass and not her pussy...lost 1 star...4stars

Hope you plan to continue this, you've done well so far. Since you've gotten what appear to be rave reviews, I beg you to keep this same formula, mother, son and love for each other. Some authors think you need to add various and sundry dicks, pussies, etc. and just turn a great story into what is for me, a train wreck. Having said that, I'm looking forward to these two having more sex, dating, having even more sex, getting pregnant, having even MORE.... Well you get it, right?

Loved the long build up and enjoyed the "dating" twist, what a great job of discribing each character, and history... almost real! Hope you are planning more?!

Very erotic story, but turned a bit porn-ish towards the end.

Ended well, but could be expanded if you wish.

Please write more, like this.

THIS STORY WAS VERY FUCKING HOT......PLEASE WRITE MORE CHAPTERS3

I greatly appreciate all the comments!

Just to respond to a few things...

- Yes, this is my first publicly published story. I have however written some erotic fiction in the past that never saw the light of day. I tried to get another story published on this site a few years ago - and it got rejected so many times for reasons i couldn't understand. I gave up in frustration. This story got rejected a few times as well - but i was more determined to see it through.

- Regarding my name 'Eddie_King' - No doubt there have been other authors or members with similar iterations on this theme. I thought i was being clever - but every time i think that - it just means that a thousand people have done it before me. Truly, there's nothing new under the sun.

- I have about 20 other story ideas outlined. And i hope that i can do them all. At the moment, though - i'm a very slow writer. This first story took me over a month! And i'm already a couple weeks into my second.

- I know that i can't please everyone. For instance, as into incest fantasy as i am, i'm not at all interested in incestuous pregnancies. Sorry. So i just try to write the stuff that turns me on. Hence the armpits, anal, panties, etc. Hopefully, if it works for me, it will have a similar effect on some readers. Maybe that's why it takes me so long to write... too much jackin' off!

- Regarding more chapters. No plans at this time. As a reader, I tend to favor self-contained vignettes over sprawling multi-part tales with lot's of development.

When i think about this story critically, I think that i could have cut some content out of the middle, and this story would have been a bit better. Also i think this story is very much a "guy's" wish-fulfillment type of fantasy. I'm not sure how much women would dig this story. Obviously, i'd like to write stories that are enjoyed greatly by both (or all) genders.

Please let me know if this story got you jackin' or jilling and cumming while reading. That's the goal!

Also - I would love to hear feedback from women on what they thought.

Thanks again! / E.K.

I loved the hairy armpits. Also the sweaty, dripping sex. Add lactation and you'd make my head explode

Absolutely loved it, don't give 5 stars often but this deserves all 5.

It's mothers day as I read this story and believe this has to be the best mothers day she ever had! Happy mothers day to all the ladies out there, and to you, the author, keep writing. I enjoyed the story very much!

To all the beautiful, sexy MILFs out there who have inspired so much passion and desire in their sons (and daughters) - Thank you! May you all have an incredible day and evening.

This had me shooting like a 4th of July fireworks show. Sequel if possible!

This has to be one of the hottest stories I've read in a long while, read's like it could be a true story. please you must continue writing more of the same...

This was a very good visual storyline that I like. I hope to see more like this.

Outstanding!!!!!! MORE!!!!!!!!!#

This goes to my favourite for sure.

A mother who talks like a slut and looks like a porn star is not sexy. I know this is supposed to be porn, but it's a turnoff.

Great story. Really great first story. My lovely wife and I love to fantasize/role play about incest, and we both enjoy anal (for her). Cersei and Jamie Lannister visit our bedroom pretty often. So I'm really looking forward to your next story!

You're going to need to write more stories as that was super hot!

lol, it was like I was inside the story

Wow. Very steamy. I liked it.

five stars.

Terrific, very erotic story. Very well written, with a great, vividly portrayed, and slow buildup. Really fantastic.

This is one of the few mom/son stories where I can picture my actual mom doing everything. Well done : )

I enjoyed this story very much. The writer took his time to get to the point where sexual intimacy began between the mother and the son. Waiting for that to happen, and yet knowing that it will happen (because of the nature of this publication) created suspense and made the story more arousing.

I agree with the positive comments others have made about the story and hope that you will continue to write more. Your story was kind of realistic (in the early parts) which was nice, and I enjoyed the fact that there was cunt-licking and asshole-licking of the mother by the son - both of which images turn me on. The fact that the mother wanted to be fucked in her asshole was even hotter. I also enjoyed the literary devices used by the author such as the mention of the rain that began to fall as the mother and son got into fucking each other.

Very hot. Thank you.

Great story, I gave it 4-stars. Though to be completely honest, I would've given it 5 had the son actually cum in his Mom's pussy and not her ass. Or hell, even fill all three holes. Don't get me wrong, I certainly have no issue with the anal part, I just prefer cumming in the pussy rather than the ass. That's just me though.

A very good first story Eddie.

Waiting for another, as you say you have 20ish in mind. Always good to write about experiences.

Didn't like the Anal and don't enjoy it myself. The mussel in the bottom isn't the same as the mussel in the virgina and the pleasure is far far greater in the virgina.

Also don't like the course language but its 'horses for courses'. what do others think especially the females.

All in all a very good story, thoroughly enjoyed the part when son was excited putting his stiffy up against his mothers bottom and she enjoyed it. Most woman love the erection from a penis where ever it touches them.

You could go to the Older Lady, maybe your Mums friends. Just a thought.

Keep writing.

REgards

Story ! Luved that Mom got so hot she was more than willing , that she was eager to take him in her hot ass.

No thank you. That was too weird for me.

The best story I've read so far ! Loved it ! Keep up the good work !

Wonderful.

Can hardly wait for your next story.

Thanks.

Very realistic loved the story!

breed the old whore?

Great story, beginning to end.

The story is awssom......i mean wowww..

Fukking...great.

Wounderful amazing erotic story. Keep writing PLEASE!

Please write some more. I thoroughly enjoyed this story.

Great story . nothing whorish about the woman. ever man should have such a mom. the writer paid her great respect yet revealed and wroteabout a very erotic woman .

Thanks for sharing.

One of the hallmarks of an excellent incest story isn’t who is fucking whom, or in which ways, but rather the long, slow burn that leads to them crossing that uncrosssble line, and this story had three pages of smoking, smoldering tease. I absolutely loved it and would have given it 10 stars if I could have.

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Definitely hot as hell hot and very loving.

Incredibly hot mother and son story. Give us more please. 5*. -dave.

That was a great story and one I couldn’t put down. I especially like that it took you so long to write. I believe the best tales come out that way and this ranks right up there with the best mommy-son sex writers!

Awesome read! More!!!!!!!

That was just plain hot! Good job writing it.

A sequel would go well with this one

Fucking your mom's ass right away is kind of going a little overboard. Enjoy the pussy first. Anal really shouldn't happen until fucking gets routine. That could be a long time.

Delicious. The build up and pacing were perfect.

More please

The anal really should've been saved for a part 2 to this story, it was a missed opportunity to not have the son cum in his Mom's pussy (which let's be honest, if you're not gonna have a son bust in his Mom's twat, then everything else is a waste). The anal card was played too early. Still, overall this was a great story.

Hi and thanks for your comment. I definitely see your point. While it may not be the most likely scenario, this was such an ass-centric story (and they weren't using birth control) so it just made sense to finish up the way they did. Besides, i'm not into multi-part stories - so i had to fit everything into this one - so to speak. Thanks again for your comment. / E. K.

Such a horny story, Thank you

It is one of my favorites. It pushed so many of my buttons.

As my internet name suggests I have had a strong foot fetish for most of my life.

Mom starts by wearing her classic Ked's sneakers to start the housework project. Sweaty mom getting her sweaty feet in her sneakers, very flavorful!!

Then the hairy sweaty armpit kisses. More flavor !!! I loved it !!! [I don't want a woman fresh from the shower - no flavor].

Then the high school outfit scene: Navy blue knee socks & brown loafers. I met my wife in college during the winter season. I will never forget when she kicked off her brown loafers & let me take off her navy blue knee socks & show me her bare feet for the first time.

They were so beautiful; I knew she was the woman for me!!!

This we will celebrate our 55th wedding anniversary this year & her feet are still very sexy!!!

[I read your other story also; another great read.]

You're a great writer!!!

My only complaint is that is that you don't write more stories!!

Please, some more!!!

Thank you for your friendly comment. And i agree that a woman's scent is one of the the most visceral turn-ons there is. I have begun a couple stories, but am having a difficult time finishing them. Thanks for the encouragement though - because it does help to motivate. Congrats on your long happy marriage!

Very good writing and the subject matter pushed all my buttons. Your description paints a vivid picture. Thanks for being literate. I wasn’t distracted by lazy typos and misspellings which litter so many of the stories on Literotica.

Please keep writing!

So many of the incest stories lack realism. But this scenario played out in a believable way. I’m still not a big fan of incest stories, just not my thing. But this story had me riock hard from start to finish and I wish there was more.

Very well written, and I enjoyed the build up, how Mom fought with her convictions before finally giving in to her desires. Well Done!

well another gay story...

I enjoyed this story very much. Liked the build-up. I wish you would continue and have them go out on a date and fuck outside, blowjobs in the car/movies, etc. Have mom wear her school outfit on an outing. LOL. Have fun writing them.

This story was so fucking erotic. The descriptions of

Mom's pussy and ass so vivid and then the ass fucking....I am so hard!!

omg

Nice job! You shouldn't have quit!

The build up was very nicely paced. No dragging, but you left room for a dynamic development. When mom and especially son are almost ready to ravish each other they start to look at mom's old photos. Thus the son pauses and reconsiders his mom. Without that scene you still would have delivered a hot story, but you managed to add some depth to the characters. To more prerequisites for a mom/son story to deserve 5 stars in my esteem are the absence of more people getting involved sexually and for the son to maintain some respect.

Needless to say, I'm gladly awarding 5 stars!

Excellent story. Loved the mutually respectful, loving attitude of both mom and son and the way that, ultimately, they could not resist despite the taboo involved.

My personal preference would have been for him to have exploded his final load deep in her fertile, unprotected cunt… but maybe next time, eh? :)

Excellent character development and build up, Made me think I was there. Keep writing...

Beautifull story. Characters were logically developed, both emotionally and sexually. The respect, sensitivity, and sexual intimacy reflected in this story is what would expect in a real world incestuous relationship. The inner conflict experienced by the mother was logically expressed. However, she realized that love has no boundaries. Love does what it wants to do and it takes whatever format it wants. True love does not recognize boundaries. Subconsciously, the mother worried about her status/relationship with her son, However, as a mature individuals, they both recognized that sex is the most physically, mentally, emotionally and spiritually fulfilling experience life has to offer. The sexual and emotional epiphany experienced by the mother and son was beyond reproach. 5-star story.

great back n forth action, you've got talent,

Great, it certainly grew in tight symetry. You could almost feel the sweat and contact

(5/1/2022) Absolutely brilliant! Both your stories are Brilliant. Please start submitting again. Thank you so much for these two lovely fantasies. Five stars of course.

5 stars and about to read your other story. Please write more

Steamy, sexy and full of anticipation. Terrific descriptive language of the fucking and sucking. A story worth reading again - and perhaps again. Great job, Author!

WOW! Hot…HOT…HHHHHHOTTTTTTTTT…!!!

The best one i hv ever read , mate , this one theeeeeeeeeeee bestttttttttt

5* out bl00dy standing!!! love the whole work up, even loved the idea she had some armpit hair!!! also glad she didnt have a big hairy bush, are you able to some how continue this? it would be awesome.....11/09/22

The big wet spot on my couch cushion is the best compliment I can give you. Wow

I read a story where a boy teased his mother and it was a big turn-off. I love the way the mother teased the son by wanting to go back to work. The buildup was great and I think I found my biggest kink. Your writing skills are great!

That is a killer story on its own and then adding the mom/son forbidden love just took it to a new level.

Holy friggin.......... I forgot to breath for a while. One of the hottest stories I've read. A dozen stars for this story, unfortunately only 5 counts. Wow. Almost made a mess. Thanks for sharing.

Just incredible on all levels

Awesome story well written!

This was excellent, from the build up with all of its intoxicating elements to the sex, just outstanding.

I surely wish this author had chosen to write more than 2 stories

Another great story, very well told. You have a gift. Don't let it go to waste!

Great story. I wish you had more!

Immediately saved into Favourites, that is one hot story! 👍

One of the few times I have given a story five stars. Very hot and very well written. I hope you do more stories.

FUN FACT: about this line in this story-- "like a young Marisa Tomei. Mom's lips bowed in a Mona Lisa smile"

In the movie "My Cousin Vinny" Marisa Tomei named was Mona Lisaa Vito (how ironic if the did or didn't know that fact😱🤯)

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One of my favourite Literotica stories of all time

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Pathetique!