All Comments on 'Horsemen of the Apocalypse'

Interesting start for a first story. It wasn't the usual crap served here. 4*

Pretty much the worst excuse for a story that I’ve seen in a while.

I threw up in my mouth right before I stopped reading this disturbing piece.

Ignore the trolls here who can never say anything complimentary. I enjoyed the story; there are a lot of guys who would enjoy seeing their wife airtight in a sex show setting.

There are a lot of people who will never write a decent story, but come on here and read other people's works and then slag them off.

Don't listen to them. Just switch off mentally, they are not there.

You write a fluid and exciting style, fast-paced and the story (even though the subject is as old as the world) was great fun to read.

I'll look for more from you, thanks.