All Comments on 'Home for the Holidays'

by petitmort

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BoytitsBoytitsover 3 years ago

That was nice very sexy , thanks for writing.

dietz10000dietz10000over 3 years ago
A Beautiful Story

Thankyou for a beautiful story of love. I enjoy best stories where I can feel the love expressed, I hope there is a follow up to this.

Merry Christmas

Ron

JamokieJamokieover 3 years ago
Bravo!

Excellent story. I especially liked the setting and the French expressions. The action was hot as well. Like any good story it left me wanting more. What was their history? What was their future? I look forward to more stories from you. Oh, one more thing: I love your "handle".

zooliciouszooliciousover 3 years ago

I love the French thrown in for wondrous effect. She is sexy, and their chemistry is undeniable. Very hot story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Oh my

Lovely writing

☺️

Many_MemoriesMany_Memoriesover 3 years ago
NICE! SUPER nice!

Kinda reminiscent of my time in France back in the mid 1960's (Dec 64 thru Jul 66). Some good memories and quite a bit growing up!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Use the same language

I don’t know French and found the intermittent use of it distracting. I could not finish the story and will not read anymore of your offerings if they are written in this style. If I had rated it, simply based on style, I would have given it a 2, however I don’t rate stories I don’t like.

gypsycharmgypsycharmover 3 years ago
Beautiful piece of writing again

Thank you! Loved the whole story. Reminded me of the retro French porn movies where we see these themes play out a lot. And loved the French phrases thrown around - c'est très erotique.

Wish you would write more (stories) involving the nude beaches in Europe - they are so carefree about this over there!

Ciao!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Very Nice 5 stars

Not interested in the gay anal. But nice hot story otherwise.

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People have asked about my name - petitmort. It's a bastardization of la petite mort or little death in French, a literary term for orgasm. I am part French, part Italian, living in the US now and working as a writer and editor. I love travel, film, nature, good food and win...