by AC_Pandorra
Here once was a comment which said something like "what a crap".
I wonder myself where it had gone, because I would never delete any comment. May it be as inspring and constructive as the comment which is missing. :-)
Each comment and each vote is a feedback and therefore a motivation to go on and grow better.
If Bdsm is your thing then this story is oh so very hot. Would love to see a sequel. Great character building that leaves you wanting more for Heather and Chris. Maybe Chris can take lessons from Lieke.
I will look for more of your writing. Thanks for sharing this. Perhaps you should include a native English speaker in your writing process, next time?