All Comments on 'His Pleasurable Torment'

Nicely done. Please write more.

I dream of moments like this in my life. It is like you crawled inside my mind and used it for your playground! Thank you!

Very nice - sensual and erotic. If you are up for it and have the time it would be great to see these characters develop some more. Thanks.

But you REALLY need an editor/proofreader. Errors are too distracting. Hopefully there will be subsequent chapters.

Very descriptive, nice writing!

A sensuous, thoughtful femdom story of which there are too few on this site. Yes, there are some grammar errors, but they detract little. I encourage you to continue writing and posting.

Such a good example of "femdom lite" that it almost reminds me of Devotional Sex. Most femdom depicts women who despise men, so I love the way she cares for him. Five stars! Please write more!

Great climactic buildup of incredible release.

But it ended much too soon.