All Comments on 'Hedonism Island: A BBC Discovery'

Just Wow!

Oh, now that's what I call an illustrated story, I do hope that there are many more segments to CUM, sorry couldn't resist that one Jasmine. I'm not sure such a place actually exists, but if it did sign me up. 5stars naturally.

I couldn't read much of the dialogue because it was too small. Nice pictures though.

Is there a way to get the pictures included in a greater resolution? In some panels (e. G. Panel 11 and 14) in landscape mode the text is blurred so much as to be almost unreadable.

You have done it again Jaz. Really enjoyed it!!

I really enjoy reading these. As an author, I know it inspires me to do better when people post nonconstructive hate without having the courage to post their account name so we can discuss their concerns.

Nobody forces you to read stories about topics you don't like. Silkstockingslover is one of the best authors on Literotica and doesn't deserve your scorn.

Great!!! Can’t wait for the next part!!

Hard to put my finger on just why, but it was terrible. And I'm a big fan. This was one of your worst though. Right up there, or down there, with Domincan slut and the civil war one. I feel dumber having read it. Sorry, but not up to ssl standards. 1*

Such a good story, keep up the great work!

Can we get some white guys who get black girls hooked on white cock?

The plotline isn't exactly new - as a matter of fact, it's a little tired and borders on trite - but combined with the graphics it takes on a whole new life. And the graphics were excellent! Kudos to your collaborator, and I'm looking forward to more. I think you may need a little more work on hubby's character; right now he's just a plot point. Looking forward to it as it progresses.

Very amusing.

The story and the illustrations are amazing. I can’t wait to read the next part.

Hot story and even hotter visuals. Please continue

"Sweet fuckin' Jesus" is a much more meaningful phrase than "Oh God" which gets repeated over and over again by 95% of writers.. Love the pics. A perfect ten from me.

Both those massage sessions got me hard and throbbing!

More, please......

Loved this story especially with illustrations. I would love to go to Hedonism Island with my wife - she needs a fucking from a BBC and I need a good pegging. I can't wait to read the next chapters. Maybe the sissy hubby will be wearing women's clothes when he gets fucked with his wife getting a BBC in front of him. I can't wait.

Jasmine that was the best graphic porn comic I've read to date look forward to more

Your stories never fail to turn me on, and I’ve always loved the “illustrated” versions of your work. This one reaches new heights! A wonderfully reworked version of your story. I hope the illustrations for Part 2 are being worked on now, and will be posted soon.

I guess I better go looking for the original story now..... ;-)

I loved the comic book format and the art work is great. Hedonism island? Did Jeremy Epstein own it? Sounds like a great island, indeed. 5*

Adore the artwork. Makes a great addition to your usual brilliant scenes.

You're a single mom.

Hey everybody, if you want to see more comics with similar themes to this from the artist (i.e. me) you can find them at my Patreon! Not sure if I can link to other sites from here but basically:

patreon dot com slash interqueen

Looking forward to the next instalment,.

The idea and the comic is very good but I think you was better at long story such as deconstructing the professor, and your average story is 3 pages this one is one page maybe some rest for thinking is warrented

Dear Jazz

All your illustrators have been good, but this one is top drawer (opinion). Illustrations are complex, erotic, detailed, the cocks, cunts and tits (the sex parts) are excellent... the cum-shots are the best yet, and I believe this has given you a nudge ahead in your style and writing attack (if that's even possible). Stockings, garters and hairy snatches are still my favourites. I hope you achieved a number of satisfactory wet climaxes... as do your readers, while working up this nice tale.

Love You,

Jack Auff x o

Absolutely love this story despite BBC and pegging not being my "thing". Great to see first class illustrations. As others have noted it would be great of some of the images could be updated to improve readability of text. I can't wait for the next part of the story.

Once again another wonderful job.

Had a hard on the entire read

I lurk alot but wow I had to comment here, fantastic story and just wow. I read these at work and let's just say I had to make a trip to the bathroom for a wank. Just really fantastic!

Not just this story, but the new way of telling it? The graphic novel approach? Because that’s fucking hot! Will you bring it to the other genres you write in?

This was great. I'd love to see the sequels!

Super Hot story, love to be her husband

A perfect sensuous story.

Each person got what they wanted or needed.

I want more of this story tbh

Love the art but wish the dialogue was not comic book form. Yet another fun story!

Brilliant graphics.. Could someone guide me to the original submission this is based on?

great story is there going to be more to come

I've followed your brilliantly sexy stories for years. This Illustrated story is by far my favorite. I LOVE the comic book approach. Please feed me more!

P.S. I fantasize about being your submissive slut

Fantastic. Clearly there is a lot of work here in the graphics, as the quality is amazing. Great work. Now, please bring us Part 2. And if possible the text in the graphics needs to be a bit larger, as some is somewhat unreadable and detracts a bit from the entire amazing experience of going through this. Still 5 stars, if not 6

The best I agree with the above. The storyline has so many possibilities that my imagination runs wild. And the illustrations are amazing. Your illustrator is a real artist. Not just in drawing the figures but the composition is spot on. I’m looking forward to the results of two amazing talented artists.

What a tale you have woven! Screaming form all the interaction! PURFECT! and the visuals make it cum

Jasmine your story with Allison's illustrations merge perfectly. Please consider part 2 with her,and please please do Daughters initiation part 4.

Did the husband go back to the island and suck a big Black dick and let it pen penetrate his asshole and he became a BBC cumslut

Omg Jasmine so absolutely depraved and debauched. You just get better and better, totally outrageous fucking accompanied by the outstanding illustrations.my live in fuck buddies and I blew our minds trying to act this out so totally fucked up and drunk on cunt juice. Oh what would I not give to totally fuck and suck your brains out Jasmine. Can barely wait for part two. Cunt struck sex maniac Lanc’s UK.

Wow, that was so hot. As usual your stories always seem to be exactly what I am looking for 😉. You are my all time favorite author of erotic literature.

Great story and well illustrated! Beautifully done!

I love interracial porn and seeing beautiful white girls fucking hung black studs and white guys being turned in BBC suckers. Love the story.

Magnificent! Can't wait for more!

The story is good and the art is fantastic!

Thanks for sharing.

I liked that she got the full bbc experienc that she craved. He clearly was a dud in bed but, semed to be a nice husband in other ways. Im glad that he also got to have a new experience and got to get off from it, the pegging/handjob/cumkiss was very nice for him. I hate cuck stories where the poor sap is left a home, in a chastity cage, with no release and filled with shame. I think that this story addresses his inadequacy in a gentle way and gives them both a mutual solution. I hope that they can stay married and affectionate with each other. Loved the artwork.

Hot ass story. Why can't this be read on the Literotica app.

Nice. Haha, great transformation to a graphic story, bravo. A longtime ago, hubby and I went there, he even watched me getting fucked by a BBC, one wild trip for me but it shook him up quite a bit watching his wife orgasm by other men. I wasn't keen athirst but a few gummies and drinks and his wish was granted. PS: we're still together.

262. Artwork was magnificent but a bit difficult to read. The illustrations really add spice to this story, and the vacation is apparently going to get really hot and steamy.

Really like, but pictures were quite small, and hard to read. Thank you very much!

Wow! Pictures added a lot. Great story

As usual a fu**ing incredibly hot story!

It's good to add spice to a couples sex life.

very very good story and drawings..

My husband doesn’t like it but he loves to watch

OMG THAT WAS THE BEST, THE HOTTEST ILLUSTRATED STORY IN ALL MY YEARS OF READING LITEROTICA!!! And that is most high praise indeed, as SSL is the most high priestess of all things erotica. Thank you, thank you!