All Comments on 'Guardian Program - Prologue'

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LitCritLitCrit2 months ago

An ambitious undertaking - it will be interesting to watch it develop. Interaction between the narrator and the computer is stilted, but perhaps to be expected when creating a relationship between a human and a self-aware computer. I'm on board for the next episode.

LivesToReadLivesToRead2 months ago

Intriguing to say the least. Your stories are always out of the box. This one could go in so many directions I can’t imagine where you’re taking me this time. Looking forward to the journey.

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