by silkstockingslover
Who would have thought you could pack so much delicious filth into only 750 words?!! I agree with legsfeettoes. Delightful! 5 stars!
Short and to the point. This must be what it is like when people just read the sex scenes. I prefer your more in depth stories.
I did the math. If grandma had a kid at 18, and that kid had the grandson at 18, and the grandson is now 18, that would make grandma 54. Highly probable that she would still be sexy to her grandson. Strangely, doing the math made me enjoy the story more.
Gotta agree with Anonymous, Grandma looks mid-30s not mid-50s. Also, is it just me or is the vibrating egg still inside her at the end of the story?
Not very erotic. Just a wham bang whatever you say ma’am. The pics were distracting as gram appears to a teen unaged as an adult. Removing the egg made no sense. This story needs some fleshing out. Nice try, but you need to get back to more detailed stuff.
I liked the story and the illustrations. Wouldn’t complain if you also wrote a sequel some day…
that's a great use of 750 words. Nothing was wasted. One hot grandma. Good story.