by Oedipus_Dreams
Wonderful story. I always wondered what would happen if someone found one of my stories. I don't think they would be as understanding at the mother in this story.
Keep up the good work.
5-stars.
Finally some originality and realism injected into this theme!!!! Great start.
So FUCKING HOT!!!!!
5 Stars.
Can't wait to read numerous more chapters and hear about the stories and fantasies that they write.
The reluctant son theme is mostly annoying and totally unrealistic. Well written, but really contrived and too slow paced for the quality of both the son's stories and your writing. If you put as much detail into the sex scenes as you did in describing the son's angst I would have enjoyed the story even more.
Him being reluctant didn't make any sense to be honest.. and destroyed the flow.. 4/5
Well written. I kind of like the boy's reluctance, it showed the shock of his dreams coming true against the odds. The dirty talk by his mom Jackie was hot! Maybe involving the Dad as an unwilling cukold might make an interesting twist. Keep up the good work.
Liked it. I can understand the second thoughts.
note: shuttered is putting shutters over a window, shudder is a strong shiver.
I like the reluctance. Its drawing the tension out teasing. Also its hot that the mom has to seduce him/convince him into it because hes hesitating which also goes back to the idea the idea they cant keep their hands off each other no matter what or how wrong. Just my two cents. Love the story and hope we get to read more!
eXCLENTE, ESPERO sea una histtoria de 40 caputlos de 6 hojas cada unoa de puro morbo, lenceria y cerderia. tanks you
Really Hot and binding. Mommy could Go for a Psych. The play with their story-like roles and the awareness of their real Life relationship in contrast is the salt in it! Keep it up! Yes, later hubby could get a role too.
Awesome story how a son wanted his mother so bad he wrote incest stories about her that finally came to be and how a mother has a sexual relationship with her son! It was a good read but you should have continued wuth more! Gave it 5 stars!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I LOVE how you play off the guilt vs. the thrill / wrongness of the taboo.
Please keep writing!!
Great story! Love stories where the mom is aggressive in how much she wants to be dominated by her son. If this is just the start of more stories with these two, I can't wait for more!
Part of Sean's infatuation is the taboo of incest. calling her Jackie's would lessen that. Perfect amount of hesitation as it normal for boy his age with anyone.
Captures pure love only a mother and son can share.
Can't wait until she find the stories with her being pregnant and him latching on to her big milkers evey chance he gets!
Here I was, fucking my mother thought Sean. "Oh mom, you are so tight, I love the way you feel, the way you make my cock feel. I've wanted you for so long, especially your gorgeous body. From your curves to your c-cup tits, your tight round ass, and your trimmed triangle bush, when your naked, I want to fuck you," Sean moaned, groaned, and grunted, as he started fucking Jackie's pussy.