All Comments on 'Gay Bulls Ch. 01'

Is this writer for real?

The title and the description do not fit the story.

The story has potential as an outline and needs to be fleshed out. I would suggest that you rewrite this starting with the outline and add detail. Once you have the story select a title and see if you can find an editor. You have potential but don't let the negative comments this first draft will get stop you writing.

what happened? did the author get bored of their own story after five minutes of typing? you can hardly title something chapter one and then post little more than a paragraph. story, like the main character's cock is nothing to write home about so the author didn't bother.

There is nothing in this story to warrant inclusion in a group sex category or the tags bisexual, cuckold, bull or interracial.