by Malice_in_Wonderland
I know you put *mistress* in the tags but it would have been helpful if you’d also stated; the sex of the *slave(s)* involved.
My personal preference is m/dom with f/sub because I’m female and that’s the main direction of my preferred kink. It would have saved a lot of time. In a broader perspective I’m open to reading lots of things so I don’t exactly dislike your story per se, I just haven’t read it. As such I opted to leave without rating.
Best of luck with your writing.
Tess (uk)