Fitting End to a F--king Lousy Date

Thank you.

I'll be so glad when I'm done with the last of dezurtdawg's stories (just a couple left to check out that interested me based on the description). But damn if it isn't the same bullshit clichés in them all. Huge cocks, annoying characters with the same characteristics and behaviours, predictable disappointing arcs. Come on man, change it up a little.

So I'm guessing Becky got scared when she felt how big he was, and instead of acting like a rational adult and talking about it, she behaved like a complete bitch and ran away, making him feel like total trash. Now while I'm not saying it's entirely implausible, there was a better way to handle that as a writer that doesn't make us hate her a bit. But maybe you like antagonizing us :)

And I know you mentioned it at the start, but honestly the slurred speech is just stupid. They're not that drunk and even if they are, we don't need to feel like we are to read what they're saying.

The mother is really in the background squeezing out shits, really? She must have digested some of the author's worst stories earlier that day. I swear this author is just some horny teenager writing out his twisted fantasies with no idea how to craft a real compelling story without so much bullshit woven into it. I've yet to read one of his stories that hasn't made me roll my eyeballs and say "really?" several times throughout it.

I’d love more! I thought mom was going to clean out sis… so much possibility here!

What's the spelling? Lol wtf

Good whiskey!