by MaskedElly
I agree with the last comment- this was well structured, well written and HOT!
And I don't think that the time spent setting up the character backgrounds in the beginning needs any apology, it just makes the rest of the story so much more absorbing......looking forward to more!
I was imagining a beat takeshi type in Xe Wei. He was so real and I just loved this whole story, I felt every bit of his agony. Totally rooted for his character, and I felt like the background wasn’t in the way of getting to the hot action at all, usually I’m skimming if it’s too long but not here, enjoyed the writing so much. I could read a book about a guy like this.