All Comments on 'Fiction'

A really beautiful piece of art. Thank you for writing this.

Really enjoyed this. Wonderful writing!!

I love it that you went beyond everyone's image of what transpires between a couple with this scene and shared the heart of what it means to be a dominant and what it means to be a submissive. That safe word: fiction. That's priceless. Excellent writing, but I expect that from you.

I keep reading this story again and again and my soul expands every time. It is beautifully written.

Not a word wasted. Seductive and quietly urgent. Excellent.

Enticing, alluring and seductive. Such detail is a beautiful thing to see. Thank you for not abandoning your craft and giving us eye candy to read.

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