All Comments on 'Family Obligations'

by RaycerEdge

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digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichover 15 years ago
She will make a good submissive slave

As far as incest fantasies go,this will make a good series. The making of a submissive cow (a female who has been taught that her main goal in life is to breed and have children)is always exciting, and should be very interesting to follow the process.I think you should elaborate on the other women in the family, and how they were broken to submissiveness.Are the wives of the three men sexually trained to serve the men of the family? How many other women are in the family, and are they cows? A great start and I hope to read more of your fantasy....Rich

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Very Promising

Well written, rich imagination, and really hot!

I can't wait to write more about her training!

soakingsubsoakingsubover 14 years ago
mmmmmmmmmmm

Oh I loved it, it made me so wet. I wish I was the daughter tied to the bed.

Redrudy13Redrudy13about 14 years ago
This is just plan rape!!!!!

I can understand is she seduced all three of these men and they agreed to it, But when they force her to what they want, then it becomes all around rape and rape is horribly wrong! What makes this worse, is her parents promised to let her go to college only to shoot her down like a defenseless dog.

If this is just a fantasy, then you my friend have major issues that need to be resolved. If you do decide to finish this story, at least allow her a way to escape as far as she can.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Fantasy

To Redrudy and anyone else who objects to this story:

In a world of fantasy, you can dream up whatever you want. If you don't like someone else's fantasy, go create your own.

Your objection--that "this is plain rape!"--is laughable. You clearly have no idea how common rape fantasies are--for women and men. In the world of reality, rape is horrific. In the world of fantasy, rape can be intensely erotic. What we abhor "out there" -- rape, incest, pedophilia, Master/slave etc. -- might be what we adore "in here," in the inner world of our dark desires and our frightening--and freeing--fantasies.

indefinable1indefinable1over 13 years ago
i like it

i have a guilty pleasure for incest and non-consensual - i loved this and will probably think about it tonight when i touch myself

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
wow

this one just sent me over the edge, thank you!

Gemini552Gemini552almost 11 years ago
What Fun!!

I had a great time reading this story. Really hope you continue on with it. In the meantime I plan on reading more of your stories. Thanks for sharing your story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
lesbian daughter

when my young daughter told me she was a lesbian i was shocked. then i got horny thinking about it.as months went by my daughter did not mind if i jerked off while i watched her eat pussy

BBWseekingBBWseekingover 9 years ago

Please continue the story

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Great story.

Great to read seriously I would like to read another part of this if you got any plans for writing

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
More?

Where is the rest ? What happens the time she stays at the cabin and uncle Rick and grandpa takes her too. You left it unfinished.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Please write a sequel

Amazing story ... my favorite. Please write a sequel

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