by eric shawn listo
And the purpose of your story is what; a guide to cheating ... let me see the friend, another friend and another friend and for a change the mother, the father, the brother, the cat, the dog, the canary????
A good story does have some degree of credability... yours doesn't...so why did the dickhead in your story marry in the first place????
So well told and written that it seems more like fact than fancy. It's how the church has put sex into nothing more than 'baby making' and ignores the real beauty of sexual relations between man and woman.
Ignore anonymous in NZ - that was a GREAT read and I don't use that word lightly. The writing was excellent and I thought it made for a very realistic story. Shit happens in marriages. People marry for the right reasons but it doesn't always work out and temptations such as the one in the story are often hard to resist. I look forward to reading the rest of the series. Well done!