All Comments on 'Daddy Writes Erotica Ch. 04'

loved it!

Worth the wait! Once again I am wet and my nipples are little rocks! Reading your stories are my favorite bedtime ritual! Thanks!!!

I'm wet and satisfied ... thank you .. xo

i'm loving Daddy tooo..god You are so hottttttttttttt and playful and You make this little girl want more of You each day...giggles.....love You Daddy :-)

patti

mmm hot wish i had a daddy like that very good

more please,i am still reading your stories. i have read several others but continue all of them!!!!

""Want to fuck me right here," I asked lustfully?

Are you in such a rush to get this junk published that you don't even know where the question mark goes?

I love your descriptive style, nicely done!

I had at least five orgasms while reading this. You should do more

Excellent!! Very,very erotic!

Absolutely delicious, a sexually packed Dynamo from beginning to end! I even liked throwing mom a lifeline there, with her wanting some daddy love, so she didn't look like the totally sexless wife or just the 'put out' wife, as is usual in so many stories, hehe.

I was hoping for more time between dad and the girls, maybe in future chapters?

My only complaint is the overuse of the word 'exploded' which pops up frequently and sometimes just looks out of place.

I do love how dad basically matches his stories that he writes to the letter of his real life daughter, no doubt in the one in a million chance that if she ever ran across the story she would know right away it was her and her dad, hehehe!

Can't wait to read your next story!!

Had me reading eagerly! Dan!

Who is the one in charge? or is it just that real doesn't work in this?

What started out as a great series rapidly became rather blasé due to the way overdone sex scenarios . . . .