All Comments on 'Country Girl'

I would just use more vivid and raunchy descriptions. Like how did his dick/ the sex smell? How many inches was his dick? Was the girl a virgin? Was there blood? Did she ever masturbate in private before the intercourse?

The story is good... Maybe advice for the next story you write! :)

Tattoos just timurn my stumoch. Especially tribal tattoos. Ugh.

This is an excellent story. It provided detail even though it was short. I gave it 5*s.

Although apparently your people found it okay, the force/rape aspect made me sad.